Part 1
Giám khảo
What's the weather like where you live?
Thí sinh
Emily usually a Sunday but in the last last month always running. Actually I hate running because it's so disgusting. My body is so dry.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Thí sinh
I like cold weather because when I feel cold I can wear more clothes and if if weather is hot I even take off the old clothes I can feel feel cold and it's so disgusting sweetheart.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Thí sinh
Definitely dry weather because if weather was wet, wet my body stick. It is very sticky. It's very disgusting. I hate wet weather and I like dry. I like dry weather.
Giám khảo
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Thí sinh
Yes, always I will check in the weather forecast because the weather is so hot and I always check checking the weather and I hope the temporary temperature can low and. Particular last year, always raining.
Giám khảo
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Thí sinh
Absolutely is rain. This year's my my country always always raining and last year's almost no raining day.
Giám khảo
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Thí sinh
Yes, I want to go to the warm city to live because I like warm, warm, warm city. My city always cold and I don't like cold, said he.
What's the weather like where you live?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答内容与问题不符,表达混乱且缺乏逻辑,建议直接描述居住地的天气情况,避免无关内容,使用简单明了的句子。
Ví dụ: The weather where I live is usually sunny and warm. However, sometimes it can be quite dry, which makes me feel thirsty.
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不清,语法错误较多,建议简洁明了地表达喜好,并给出具体原因,避免重复和无关词汇。
Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy wearing warm clothes. Hot weather makes me feel uncomfortable and sweaty.
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答内容重复且表达不流畅,建议使用连贯的句子表达观点,并提供具体原因,避免重复。
Ví dụ: I definitely prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel sticky and uncomfortable.
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误多,表达不完整,建议直接回答是否习惯查看天气预报,并说明频率和原因,句子要完整。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always check the weather forecast every morning because I want to know if it will be hot or rainy during the day.
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答内容简单且表达不清,建议明确说明气候变化的具体影响,使用完整句子并提供对比细节。
Ví dụ: I think climate change has caused more rain this year in my country, while last year there were very few rainy days.
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答重复且表达不流畅,建议简洁表达愿望并说明原因,避免重复和无关词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit a warm city because I don't like the cold weather in my hometown.
× Emily usually a Sunday but in the last last month always running.
✓ Emily usually runs on Sundays, but in the last month, she has been running always.
句子缺少谓语动词,导致结构不完整。应补充动词并调整词序,使句子完整且符合英语表达习惯。
× Actually I hate running because it's so disgusting.
✓ Actually, I hate running because it's so tiring.
“disgusting”意为令人厌恶,不适合描述跑步的感受,应使用更合适的形容词如“tiring”(累人的)。
× My body is so dry.
✓ My body feels very dry.
“dry”通常用来形容物体,描述身体感受时应加动词“feels”使表达更自然。
× I like cold weather because when I feel cold I can wear more clothes and if if weather is hot I even take off the old clothes I can feel feel cold and it's so disgusting sweetheart.
✓ I like cold weather because when I feel cold, I can wear more clothes. If the weather is hot, I even take off old clothes. I can feel cold, and it's so uncomfortable.
句子连接混乱,重复词语,缺少标点。应分句并去除重复,使表达清晰。
× Definitely dry weather because if weather was wet, wet my body stick.
✓ Definitely dry weather because if the weather is wet, my body sticks.
缺少冠词“the”,动词形式错误,应使用现在时“is”和第三人称单数动词“sticks”。
× It is very sticky.
✓ It feels very sticky.
描述感觉时应使用动词“feels”使表达更自然。
× Yes, always I will check in the weather forecast because the weather is so hot and I always check checking the weather and I hope the temporary temperature can low and.
✓ Yes, I always check the weather forecast because the weather is so hot. I hope the temperature can go down.
句子结构混乱,动词形式错误,应简化句子并使用正确的动词形式。
× Particular last year, always raining.
✓ Particularly last year, it was always raining.
缺少主语和谓语,时态应为过去时,需补充完整句子。
× Absolutely is rain.
✓ Absolutely, it is raining.
缺少主语“it”,动词形式应为现在进行时“is raining”。
× This year's my my country always always raining and last year's almost no raining day.
✓ This year, my country is always raining, and last year there were almost no rainy days.
时态使用不当,应区分现在进行时和过去时,且句子结构需完整。
× Yes, I want to go to the warm city to live because I like warm, warm, warm city.
✓ Yes, I want to go to a warm city to live because I like warm cities.
冠词使用错误,应使用不定冠词“a”,且复数形式更合适。
× My city always cold and I don't like cold, said he.
✓ My city is always cold, and I don't like the cold.
缺少动词“is”,且“said he”无意义,应删除。