Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和表达方式。

Ví dụ: I live in a city that has four distinct seasons. Right now, it is very hot, which makes it perfect for outdoor activities.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清晰且有重复，建议明确表达观点，避免语法错误，并用连贯的句子说明原因。

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because in summer, it often rains, which allows me to enjoy outdoor activities like jogging and playing basketball.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，且内容不完整，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并提供具体原因。

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because I live and study in Shanghai. When it's wet, my clothes get soaked, which is uncomfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够流畅且有语法错误，建议使用连贯的句子清楚说明习惯和原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before I go to bed and before meals. This helps me decide what clothes to wear.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，建议用简洁准确的语言描述气候变化的影响。

Ví dụ: Climate change has caused global warming, which leads to the melting of glaciers around the world.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议明确表达愿望并用连贯的句子说明原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to go to Beijing to experience its four distinct seasons.

× But now there is so hot which is which makes it very fine for active outdoor activities.

✓ But now it is so hot, which makes it very fine for active outdoor activities.

句子中缺少形式主语“it”，正确表达天气状况时应使用“it is hot”。

× Well, it's a very difficult question for me, but in my opinion I prefer hot weather for cause.

✓ Well, it's a very difficult question for me, but in my opinion I prefer hot weather because of the cause.

短语“for cause”用法不当，应使用“because of the cause”或简化为“because”。

× For example, in summer it's really it's really raining, so I can do some outdoors activities like jogging or play some basketball.

✓ For example, in summer it really rains, so I can do some outdoor activities like jogging or playing basketball.

“it's really raining”时态和表达不准确，应使用一般现在时“it really rains”；“outdoors activities”应为“outdoor activities”；“play some basketball”应改为“playing basketball”保持动词形式一致。

× But in my opinion, I prefer drying weather because I I live in Shanghai, I study in Shanghai.

✓ But in my opinion, I prefer dry weather because I live in Shanghai, I study in Shanghai.

“drying”是动名词，表示“使干”，此处应使用形容词“dry”来描述天气。

× So if the weather is wet, my clothes, my clothes will be will be way too.

✓ So if the weather is wet, my clothes will be way too wet.

句子不完整，缺少形容词“wet”来描述衣服的状态。

× I usually check it before I go to sleep and eat.

✓ I usually check it before I go to sleep and before I eat.

连接词使用不当，两个动作应分别用“before”连接，保持句子结构清晰。

× And I could make a decision for what could what. I could choose clothes.

✓ And I can make a decision about what clothes to choose.

句子结构混乱，应简化为“make a decision about what clothes to choose”表达清晰。

× Well, I think there are quite a lot to talk about when it comes to global changes.

✓ Well, I think there is quite a lot to talk about when it comes to global changes.

“a lot”作为不可数名词，谓语应使用单数“is”。

× For example, global warming became more and more increasingly and and ice globe and ice globals are melting.

✓ For example, global warming is becoming more and more intense, and ice glaciers are melting.

“became”时态不当，应使用现在进行时“is becoming”；“more and more increasingly”重复，应简化；“ice globe and ice globals”错误，应为“ice glaciers”。

× Yes, of course I need my city with weight and hot weather.

✓ Yes, of course I like my city with wet and hot weather.

“need”用法不当，应为“like”；“weight”拼写错误，应为“wet”。

× So for example, I like I'd like to go to Beijing to experience that places. Distinct 4 Distinct seasons.

✓ So for example, I'd like to go to Beijing to experience that place's distinct four seasons.

句子结构不完整，“that places”应为“that place's”；数字表达应为“four seasons”。