Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более естественным и лаконичным. Избегайте повторений и старайтесь использовать более разнообразную лексику для описания погоды.

Ví dụ: The weather in my hometown is generally very cold, which is what the city is best known for.

Gợi ý: Ответ немного длинный и содержит повторения. Используйте связующие слова для плавности и избегайте излишних повторов.

Ví dụ: Although I come from a very cold city, I prefer hot weather because I enjoy tropical places, especially those near the sea.

Gợi ý: Избегайте слов-паразитов и неуверенных выражений. Постарайтесь структурировать ответ с использованием связующих слов и конкретных деталей.

Ví dụ: That's a difficult question. I prefer moderate weather because dry conditions can harm my skin, but I also dislike heavy rain.

Gợi ý: Избегайте повторений и говорите более уверенно. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и конкретизируйте время и способ проверки прогноза.

Ví dụ: Yes, I check the weather forecast on my phone every morning to decide what clothes to wear for the day.

Gợi ý: Ответ слишком общий и неструктурированный. Постарайтесь дать более конкретный ответ с примерами и использовать связующие слова.

Ví dụ: Climate change has caused extreme weather events recently, mainly due to human activities like pollution and deforestation.

Gợi ý: Ответ хороший, но можно добавить больше деталей и использовать связующие слова для плавности.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit cities like Los Angeles or New York because their milder climates let me wear lighter clothes compared to my cold hometown.

× I like love to travel everywhere where the sea is.

✓ I love to travel everywhere where there is the sea.

The phrase 'like love' is incorrect; it should be 'love'. Also, 'where the sea is' is awkward; 'where there is the sea' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I usually watch the temperature on my phone up and I think the reason behind is because I want to wear appropriate clothes.

✓ I usually check the temperature on my phone and I think the reason is that I want to wear appropriate clothes.

The phrase 'watch the temperature on my phone up' is incorrect; 'check the temperature on my phone' is appropriate. Also, 'the reason behind is because' is redundant; 'the reason is that' is correct.

× I would like to visit such cities like Los Angeles or New York where the weather allows you to wear something lighter than the winter jacket.

✓ I would like to visit cities such as Los Angeles or New York where the weather allows you to wear something lighter than a winter jacket.

The phrase 'such cities like' is incorrect; it should be 'cities such as'. Also, 'the winter jacket' is too specific; 'a winter jacket' is more appropriate here.