Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“Summer are extremely hot”应为“Summer is extremely hot”。建议注意主谓一致和词汇搭配，同时避免使用不准确或不自然的表达，如“sharp constant construct”。可以用更简洁自然的句子描述天气特点。

Ví dụ: I live in Shanghai, which mainly has two seasons: summer and winter. Summers are extremely hot and memorable, while winters are cold but bearable. This sharp contrast in weather makes the climate quite unique.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达不清的问题，如“Or hot weather”应为“I prefer cold weather”。句子结构不够连贯，缺少适当的连接词。建议使用更准确的表达和连接词，使回答更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because I find high temperatures very uncomfortable. For example, I come from Xinjiang, which is also extremely hot, so I usually avoid going outdoors during the hottest times. To stay cool, I often stay inside air-conditioned places.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够准确和自然，如“can't breathe under wet weather”应改为“find it hard to breathe in wet weather”。句子重复且缺少逻辑连接词。建议丰富词汇，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because I find it difficult to breathe in wet conditions. For example, on rainy days with high humidity, I feel uncomfortable and struggle to breathe properly.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“if I plant something like travel”应为“if I plan something like traveling”。句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，注意时态和词汇使用，使表达更准确自然。

Ví dụ: I don't usually check the weather forecast daily, but if I plan to travel or go outdoors, I always check it the day before to prepare accordingly.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“climate become”应为“climate has become”，以及表达不够具体。建议使用更准确的时态和丰富具体的内容，说明气候变化的具体影响。

Ví dụ: As we all know, the climate has become warmer in recent years, which has many negative effects. For example, people are less willing to exercise outdoors, such as cycling, and it also harms the environment.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如“I like experience”应为“I like to experience”，“I have visit”应为“I have visited”。建议注意动词形式和搭配，同时可以用更丰富的词汇表达感受，使回答更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, absolutely. I really enjoy visiting other cities because I like to experience different weather conditions. For example, I have visited places with heavy rain and extremely cold weather, which are very different from where I live. Experiencing these climates has helped me become braver and broaden my horizons.

× Summer are extremely hot, which I can quite unforgettable, while winters can be very cold but still bearable.

✓ Summer is extremely hot, which I find quite unforgettable, while winters can be very cold but still bearable.

这里'summer'是单数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式'is'，而不是复数形式'are'。此外，'which I can quite unforgettable'结构不正确，应改为'which I find quite unforgettable'。

× For me, this sharp constant construct in weather makes the climate a bit unusual.

✓ For me, this sharp constant contrast in weather makes the climate a bit unusual.

原句中'construct'用错，应为'contrast'表示对比。

× Or hot weather, I prefer cold weather because I find a high temperature very uncomfortable.

✓ For hot weather, I prefer cold weather because I find high temperatures very uncomfortable.

'Or hot weather'应为'For hot weather'，且'high temperature'应使用复数形式'high temperatures'。

× To stay cool I often stay in the ship or inside air conditioned place.

✓ To stay cool, I often stay on the ship or inside an air-conditioned place.

'in the ship'应为'on the ship'，'air conditioned place'前应加冠词'an'且用连字符连接。

× I prefer dry weather actually because I can't breathe under wet weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather actually because I can't breathe in wet weather.

'breathe under wet weather'中'under'用错，应为'breathe in wet weather'。

× For example, when it comes to rainy day, I can't breathe in under a high temperature and wet weather.

✓ For example, when it comes to a rainy day, I can't breathe in high temperature and wet weather.

'rainy day'前应加冠词'a'，'breathe in under'结构错误，应去掉'under'。

× I really don't have this habit in the normal day, but if I plant something like travel and go outdoors I will check before the day I am going to outdoor.

✓ I really don't have this habit on normal days, but if I plan something like travel and go outdoors, I will check before the day I am going outdoors.

'in the normal day'应为'on normal days'，'plant'应为'plan'，'going to outdoor'应为'going outdoors'。

× As we all know, the climate become warmer and warmer and it's really have a lot of bad effects as people really don't want to go outdoor and do some exercise like cycling and so on.

✓ As we all know, the climate becomes warmer and warmer and it really has a lot of bad effects as people really don't want to go outdoors and do some exercise like cycling and so on.

主语'the climate'为单数，谓语动词应为'becomes'，'it's really have'应为'it really has'，'go outdoor'应为'go outdoors'。

× It's also harmful to environment I think.

✓ It's also harmful to the environment, I think.

'environment'前应加定冠词'the'。

× For example, I have visit places with heavy rain and extremely cold weather, which is very different from where I live.

✓ For example, I have visited places with heavy rain and extremely cold weather, which is very different from where I live.

现在完成时中，'visit'应使用过去分词形式'visited'。

× Experience this climate helps me become braver and brighten my horizon.

✓ Experiencing this climate helps me become braver and broaden my horizon.

'Experience this climate'应改为动名词形式'Experiencing this climate'，'brighten my horizon'用词不当，应为'broaden my horizon'。