Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地描述天气状况，避免无关内容。

Ví dụ: It's raining heavily today, so I prefer to stay indoors because going outside is inconvenient.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误且表达不完整。建议使用连贯的句子表达偏好，并给出具体原因。

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy the snow and it doesn't require using air conditioning, which saves electricity.

Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且语法错误较多。建议清晰表达原因，避免重复和无关内容。

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because wet conditions can make my clothes dirty, and my parents don't like that.

Gợi ý: 表达不够自然且有语法错误。建议简洁说明习惯并举例说明。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving home to decide what to wear.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不够具体且表达不清晰。建议明确说明气候变化的具体影响，并用连贯句子表达。

Ví dụ: Climate change has caused more extreme weather events and damaged ecosystems due to human activities and overdevelopment.

Gợi ý: 回答重复且表达不完整。建议简洁表达愿望并举例说明。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy visiting cities with different climates. For example, last summer I visited Beijing, which has a different climate from my hometown.

× I can't able to go outside through the rain.

✓ I can't go outside through the rain.

“can't”已经表示否定能力，后面不需要再加“able to”，这是模态动词用法错误。

× the piece of the water is more and more expensive.

✓ the price of water is getting more and more expensive.

“piece of the water”用法错误，应使用“price of water”表示水的价格。

× the hot weather I need to open my air conditioner, You know, the piece of electric is getting more and more expensive, but the cold weather, there's a chance to snow.

✓ In hot weather, I need to turn on my air conditioner. You know, the price of electricity is getting more and more expensive, but in cold weather, there's a chance of snow.

介词使用错误，应使用“In hot weather”和“in cold weather”；“piece of electric”应为“price of electricity”；“chance to snow”应为“chance of snow”。

× I prefer dry weather to wet weather because the wet weather I go outside.

✓ I prefer dry weather to wet weather because when it's wet weather, I go outside less.

代词使用不当，需用“when it's wet weather”引导时间状语从句。

× It's very easy to make my calls dirty and my parents will angry to me.

✓ It's very easy to make my clothes dirty and my parents will be angry with me.

“calls”应为“clothes”；“angry”是形容词，需用“be angry”；“angry to me”应为“angry with me”。

× But drive with I can go outside.

✓ But in dry weather, I can go outside.

“drive with I”语法错误，应为“in dry weather”。

× I always look the weather for forecast.

✓ I always look at the weather forecast.

动词“look”后应加介词“at”，且“weather forecast”是固定搭配。

× It make me know if I need to take the rent to us.

✓ It helps me know if I need to take an umbrella with me.

“make”应为“helps”；“take the rent to us”表达错误，应为“take an umbrella with me”。

× the technology has become more and more modern and it has destroyed development.

✓ technology has become more and more modern and it has caused environmental damage.

“destroyed development”表达不准确，应改为“caused environmental damage”更符合语境。

× the over development of the earth has destroyed ecosystem.

✓ the overdevelopment of the Earth has destroyed the ecosystem.

“over development”应合写为“overdevelopment”；“ecosystem”前需加定冠词“the”。

× Of course I like I like to travel other cities wherever is there in South area or north area.

✓ Of course, I like to travel to other cities, whether they are in the south or north areas.

代词使用错误，应使用“whether they are”；“travel other cities”应为“travel to other cities”；“South area or north area”应为“south or north areas”。

× Beijing is so-called area.

✓ Beijing is a well-known area.

“so-called area”用法不当，应改为“well-known area”表示“著名地区”。