Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，建议注意主谓一致和时态的正确使用，同时避免重复表达。可以简洁明了地描述天气特点，使用连词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: My hometown, Qingdao, is a coastal city in Shandong Province. Due to its location, the weather is quite comfortable, with mild summers and warm winters.

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整，但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。建议注意句子结构，避免重复，并使用更地道的表达方式。

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather, especially winter, because I enjoy playing in the snow with my friends. Summer is often too hot for me, making it hard to stay active.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法混乱，句子结构不清晰。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because Qingdao is near the sea, so it is often wet, which makes me feel uncomfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答内容完整，但存在时态错误和表达不自然的问题。建议注意时态一致，使用更准确的词汇和句式。

Ví dụ: When I was in high school, I didn't check the weather forecast because my parents told me the daily conditions. However, since I started university and live alone, I check it every day.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较为简单，语法错误较多。建议丰富细节，使用更准确的表达，并注意语法和词汇的正确使用。

Ví dụ: I believe climate change has many effects, such as the rapid rise in sea levels and increased pollution in many areas.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并避免矛盾的描述。

Ví dụ: I prefer to stay in Qingdao because I enjoy its climate, even though summers are wet. The winters are warm, which suits me well.

× Because of its special location, the weather in Qingdao are very is very comfortable.

✓ Because of its special location, the weather in Qingdao is very comfortable.

主语是单数名词短语“the weather”，谓语动词应使用单数形式“is”，而不是复数形式“are”。

× For example, it don't have it doesn't has high temperature in summer and warm in winter.

✓ For example, it doesn't have high temperatures in summer and is warm in winter.

情态动词“doesn't”后应接动词原形“have”，而不是“has”。此外，“temperature”应使用复数形式“temperatures”，因为夏天通常指多日的温度。

× For example, it don't have it doesn't has high temperature in summer and warm in winter.

✓ For example, it doesn't have high temperatures in summer and is warm in winter.

“temperature”应为复数形式“temperatures”，因为指的是夏季的多日温度。

× I couldn't move.

✓ I couldn't move.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× I enjoy my time to play with my friends in snow.

✓ I enjoy my time playing with my friends in the snow.

动词“enjoy”后应接动名词形式“playing”，而不是不定式“to play”。此外，“in snow”应加定冠词“the”，变为“in the snow”。

× I enjoy my time to play with my friends in snow.

✓ I enjoy my time playing with my friends in the snow.

“in snow”缺少定冠词，应为“in the snow”。

× it has a special location that just by the sea it so the weather in Qingdao is so wet which makes me uncomfortable.

✓ It has a special location just by the sea, so the weather in Qingdao is very wet, which makes me uncomfortable.

句子结构混乱，需调整语序和标点。去掉多余的“it”，并用逗号分隔句子，使表达更清晰。

× my parents will told me how the condition is every day.

✓ my parents would tell me how the condition was every day.

“will told”时态错误，应使用过去时“would tell”。同时，“is”应改为过去时“was”，保持时态一致。

× But after I went to the university, I live with my own so I have to check it every day.

✓ But after I went to the university, I lived on my own, so I have to check it every day.

“live”应使用过去时“lived”，因为描述的是过去的情况。

× there are a lot of pollutions appeared.

✓ there is a lot of pollution appearing.

“pollution”是不可数名词，不用复数形式“pollutions”。

× there are a lot of pollutions appeared.

✓ there is a lot of pollution appearing.

“appeared”用法不当，应使用现在分词“appearing”表示正在发生的情况。

× because it have a high temperature in the winter and low temperature in the summer,

✓ because it has a high temperature in the winter and low temperature in the summer,

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“has”，而不是“have”。