Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and concise description of the weather, mentioning the four seasons properly and giving specific examples of activities for each season. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: I live in a place with four distinct seasons: winter, spring, summer, and autumn. In summer, people enjoy outdoor activities like hiking and swimming, while in winter, many go skiing or snowboarding.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to clearly state your preference and give specific examples of activities you enjoy in that weather. Avoid repeating words and incomplete thoughts.

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to enjoy outdoor activities like hiking and fishing. Sunny days are perfect for spending time outside and being active.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question. To improve, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and add more specific reasons or examples.

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because it allows me to go out anytime without worrying about rain. For example, on dry days, I can easily plan outdoor activities like picnics or sports.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows good content but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to organize your answer with clear linking words and avoid repeating phrases. Be specific about when and why you check the forecast.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before going out. Also, when planning trips, I check the forecast for several days to make sure the weather will be good.

Gợi ý: Your answer is vague and contains many hesitations. Try to give a clear opinion with specific effects of climate change, using linking words to organize your ideas.

Ví dụ: I think climate change has caused more extreme weather in recent years. For example, higher humidity has led to hotter summers and unpredictable rainfall patterns.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to clearly express your interest in visiting different climates and give specific reasons and examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For instance, since I live in a hot area, I would enjoy spending a summer holiday in the mountains to experience cooler weather and beautiful scenery.

× We enjoy 4 Four Seasons like winter, autumn and summer and snowy and we experience old all those seasons and in the summer.

✓ We enjoy the four seasons: winter, autumn, summer, and snowy seasons, and we experience all those seasons.

The original sentence incorrectly uses '4 Four Seasons' and mixes singular and plural forms. 'Four Seasons' should be written as 'the four seasons' and the list of seasons should be clear and consistent. Also, 'old all those seasons' is incorrect and should be 'all those seasons'. This correction clarifies the plural forms and improves sentence clarity.

× In the summers people love to enjoy the outdoor games and outdoor activities and in the snow people use.

✓ In the summer, people love to enjoy outdoor games and activities, and in the snow, people do the same.

The phrase 'In the summers' should be 'In the summer' as a general time reference. 'Outdoor games' and 'outdoor activities' are plural and correctly used. The phrase 'in the snow people use' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'in the snow, people do the same' to convey the intended meaning.

× I personally prefer hot weather, for example, in the hot in the sunny days, I can go for outdoor activities such as hiking, hiking and ski fishing.

✓ I personally prefer hot weather; for example, on hot, sunny days, I can go for outdoor activities such as hiking and ski fishing.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'hot' and 'sunny days'; the correct preposition is 'on' for days. Also, 'hiking' is repeated unnecessarily. 'Ski fishing' is likely a confusion; it should be 'skiing and fishing' or 'ski fishing' if referring to ice fishing, but here it is corrected to 'ski fishing' assuming the intended meaning. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I personally prefer dry weather so that I can go anytime anywhere because in the wet weather people are restricted to their homes.

✓ I personally prefer dry weather so that I can go anywhere anytime because in wet weather, people are restricted to their homes.

The phrase 'anytime anywhere' is better expressed as 'anywhere anytime' for natural English flow. The preposition 'in' before 'wet weather' is acceptable but can be omitted for smoother phrasing. The sentence is adjusted for natural word order and clarity.

× Definitely, I'm having a habit of checking weather forecasting specially in the morning whenever I go somewhere or whenever I go for a outside for a work, for example whenever we plan a tour or a trip.

✓ Definitely, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast, especially in the morning whenever I go somewhere or go outside for work; for example, whenever we plan a tour or a trip.

The phrase 'I'm having a habit' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I have a habit'. 'Weather forecasting' should be 'weather forecast' as a noun. 'Specially' should be 'especially'. 'Go for a outside for a work' is incorrect; it should be 'go outside for work'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, I believe that now the weather is very changed, just, uh, just in, just from few years, uh, because of the humidity and, uh, it affects the temperature as well.

✓ Well, I believe that the weather has changed a lot recently, just in the past few years, because of humidity, and it affects the temperature as well.

The phrase 'the weather is very changed' is incorrect; the present perfect 'has changed' is appropriate to indicate a change over time. 'Just from few years' should be 'just in the past few years'. The sentence is rephrased for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× Yes, definitely I will visit to other cities where the climate is changed because I have to enjoy the enjoy the views and weather.

✓ Yes, definitely I will visit other cities where the climate is different because I want to enjoy the views and weather.

The preposition 'to' after 'visit' is incorrect; 'visit' does not require 'to'. 'Climate is changed' is awkward; 'climate is different' is more natural. 'I have to enjoy the enjoy' is repetitive and should be 'I want to enjoy'. The sentence is corrected for natural English usage.