Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ваш ответ содержит несколько грамматических ошибок и нечеткие выражения, например, "Sunni" вместо "sunny" и "I times it rains". Рекомендуется использовать правильные слова и более четкую структуру предложений, избегать лишних пауз и неполных фраз.

Ví dụ: The weather in my town is mostly sunny and very hot. People often look for shade under trees or inside buildings to stay cool. However, sometimes it rains and small clouds cover the city, providing a brief relief from the heat.

Gợi ý: Ваш ответ хороший, но есть небольшие ошибки, например, "an enjoy" вместо "and enjoy" и "with my love" вместо "with my loved ones". Рекомендуется использовать более точные выражения и избегать повторений.

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because in summer I can swim and enjoy cold treats like ice cream or milkshakes with my family. I also love walking in the park during summer vacations since warm weather makes outdoor activities more enjoyable. Overall, hot weather lets me spend quality time outside with my loved ones.

Gợi ý: В вашем ответе есть грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения, например, "rather than try" вместо "rather than dry" и "for freshed" вместо "refreshed". Рекомендуется улучшить грамматику и использовать более точные слова для ясности.

Ví dụ: I prefer wet weather rather than dry because when it rains, the ground becomes wet and the dust disappears, making the air feel fresher. I also enjoy swimming and relaxing in the rain as it helps me feel calm and refreshed. Overall, wet weather creates a peaceful atmosphere that I really appreciate.

Gợi ý: Ваш ответ содержит разрозненные предложения и некоторые ошибки, например, "there one moment" и "for a work". Рекомендуется строить более связные предложения и использовать правильные выражения.

Ví dụ: No, I rarely check the weather forecast because I don't think it's very important. However, once when I was going out with my friends, I needed to check it. I looked it up on the Internet, which helped me choose appropriate clothes for the walk. It was very useful.

Gợi ý: Ваш ответ очень непонятен из-за грамматических ошибок и неправильного выбора слов, например, "affect" вместо "effects", "huge mound" и "Teens with ice melting". Рекомендуется улучшить грамматику, использовать правильные слова и строить логичные предложения.

Ví dụ: In my opinion, one of the effects of climate change in recent years is the melting of large ice masses around the world. Scientists have conducted experiments that show how climate change is causing glaciers to melt faster, which leads to rising sea levels.

Gợi ý: Ваш ответ содержит ошибки и неполные предложения, например, "I relish to visit" вместо "I would like to visit" и незавершённые мысли. Рекомендуется использовать полные предложения и более точные выражения.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates from my town. Some places in the world have unique climates that make them distinctive and fascinating. Therefore, I plan to travel to more countries with diverse weather conditions.

× The weather in my town is predominantly Sunni, so it's really hot here in the outside.

✓ The weather in my town is predominantly sunny, so it's really hot outside.

The word 'Sunni' is incorrect here; the correct adjective to describe weather is 'sunny'. Also, 'in the outside' is incorrect; simply 'outside' is appropriate.

× People tried to find any shelter from the sun such is behind the tree or inside a building.

✓ People try to find shelter from the sun, such as behind a tree or inside a building.

The phrase 'such is' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'such as'. Also, 'any shelter' is better as 'shelter' in this context, and 'the tree' should be 'a tree'.

× However. I times it rains and small clouds covered the city from the.

✓ However, sometimes it rains and small clouds cover the city.

The sentence is fragmented and has incorrect word order. 'I times' should be 'sometimes', and 'covered' should be present tense 'cover' to match the context. The phrase 'from the' is incomplete and unnecessary.

× I prefer hot weather because during the summer I can swim an enjoy cold treats like ice creams or milkshakes with my family.

✓ I prefer hot weather because during the summer I can swim and enjoy cold treats like ice cream or milkshakes with my family.

The word 'an' is a typo and should be 'and'. Also, 'ice creams' is usually uncountable in this context, so 'ice cream' is preferred.

× Overall, hot weather allows me to spend more quality time outside with my love.

✓ Overall, hot weather allows me to spend more quality time outside with my loved ones.

The phrase 'my love' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'my loved ones' is the correct expression to refer to family or close people.

× I prefer wet weather rather than try because when it rained the ground becomes wet and the dust disappears which makes it the air feel fresher.

✓ I prefer wet weather rather than dry because when it rains the ground becomes wet and the dust disappears, which makes the air feel fresher.

'Try' should be 'dry'. 'When it rained' should be 'when it rains' to maintain present tense. 'It the air' is incorrect; 'the air' is correct.

× I also enjoy swimming and relaxing under the rain as it helps me feel calm and for freshed overall wet weather to create a peaceful atmosphere than I really appreciate.

✓ I also enjoy swimming and relaxing in the rain as it helps me feel calm and refreshed. Overall, wet weather creates a peaceful atmosphere that I really appreciate.

'Under the rain' should be 'in the rain'. 'For freshed' is incorrect; 'refreshed' is correct. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× No, I rarely. Check the weather forecast since I don't think it's so essential.

✓ No, I rarely check the weather forecast since I don't think it's essential.

The period after 'rarely' is incorrect and breaks the sentence. 'So essential' is better as 'essential' for natural expression.

× Nonetheless, there one moment I have checked the weather forecast.

✓ Nonetheless, there was one moment when I checked the weather forecast.

The sentence is missing the verb 'was' and the conjunction 'when' to connect the clauses properly.

× To illustrate, when I was going out with my friends for a work, I needed to check the weather forecast.

✓ To illustrate, when I was going out with my friends for work, I needed to check the weather forecast.

The article 'a' before 'work' is incorrect; 'work' is uncountable here and does not need an article.

× I looked for it on the Internet which helped me to choose my outlook for a walk.

✓ I looked for it on the Internet, which helped me choose my outfit for a walk.

'Outlook' is incorrect in this context; 'outfit' (clothing) is appropriate. Also, a comma is needed before 'which'.

× In my opinion, the affect of climate change in recent years are the ice melting there are huge mound.

✓ In my opinion, the effects of climate change in recent years include ice melting and huge mounds.

'Affect' should be 'effects'. 'Are' should be 'include' to list effects. 'Mound' should be plural 'mounds'.

× Teens with ice melting all over the world. Which can be the effect of climate change?

✓ There are glaciers melting all over the world, which can be an effect of climate change.

The sentence fragments need to be combined. 'Teens' is incorrect; likely 'glaciers' or 'ice sheets' is intended.

× To illustrate, the scientist has made an experience which showed the effects of climate change in Reese.

✓ To illustrate, scientists have conducted experiments that show the effects of climate change in recent years.

'The scientist' should be plural 'scientists'. 'Made an experience' is incorrect; 'conducted experiments' is correct. 'Reese' is likely a typo for 'recent years'.

× Yes, I relish to visit other cities that have different climates from my town since in some parts of the world there are cities that have unique climate which makes them.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates from my town since in some parts of the world there are cities with unique climates which make them

'Relish to visit' is incorrect; 'would like to visit' is appropriate. 'Unique climate' should be plural 'unique climates'. 'Makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural subject.

× Distinctive and fabulous. So furthermore, I will try to visit more countries with different.

✓ distinctive and fabulous. Furthermore, I will try to visit more countries with different climates.

The first sentence is a fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence. 'So furthermore' is redundant; 'Furthermore' alone is sufficient. The last sentence is incomplete and needs 'climates'.