Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构不完整。建议注意主谓一致，使用完整句子，并避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: The weather where I live is usually sunny and windy, which I think is ideal for outdoor activities like running.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，清楚表达观点并提供具体理由。

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because I live in northeast China where winters are cold, but indoors are warm and comfortable. Cold weather helps me relax and feel calm.

Gợi ý: 表达中有语法和用词错误，且逻辑连接不够流畅。建议使用连词连接句子，表达更连贯，并注意词汇的准确使用。

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because wet weather can make people feel unhappy and gloomy. Moreover, dry weather helps me feel relaxed and peaceful, while wet weather often soils my clothes.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，且表达不够自然。建议注意时态和拼写，使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning or evening before leaving for work. It helps me decide whether to take an umbrella. For example, if rain is expected, I always bring one.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误严重，表达不完整且不清晰。建议学习相关词汇和句型，确保句子完整且逻辑清晰。

Ví dụ: In recent years, climate change has had profound effects on the environment and human life. For example, natural disasters like floods and earthquakes have become more frequent and severe.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用完整句子，清楚表达愿望并举例说明。

Ví dụ: Yes, of course I would like to visit cities with different climates. Since I live in the cold and dry northeast of China, I want to visit places like Suzhou, Hangzhou, and Chengdu, which have warmer and more humid climates.

× Is sunny and windy I believe is best.

✓ It is sunny and windy, which I believe is best.

句子缺少主语，导致结构不完整。应加上主语“it”，并用逗号连接两个分句，使句子完整通顺。

× Whether to have a outdoor activity, for example you can running outside.

✓ Whether to have an outdoor activity, for example, you can run outside.

动词后不应使用-ing形式，正确用法是动词原形“run”。此外，冠词“a”应改为“an”，因为“outdoor”以元音音素开头。

× Yeah, my opinion, I prefer cold weatherby cause in the in the northeast of China.

✓ Yeah, in my opinion, I prefer cold weather because I live in the northeast of China.

介词使用错误，“by cause”应为“because”，且表达更自然应加“in my opinion”。

× The winter is cold, but in the room is very warm for people and I think cold weather can make me come down.

✓ The winter is cold, but indoors it is very warm for people, and I think cold weather can help me calm down.

句子结构混乱，“in the room is very warm”缺少主语，应改为“indoors it is very warm”。“come down”用词不当，应为“calm down”。

× In my opinion, I prefer dry weather 'cause I think the wet weather may be making someone on happy and down.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer dry weather because I think wet weather may make someone unhappy and down.

情态动词“may be making”用法不当，应改为“may make”。“on happy”错误，应为“unhappy”。

× Bad to the dry weather, it can help me relax and peaceful.

✓ Compared to dry weather, it can help me relax and feel peaceful.

“Bad to”用法错误，应为“Compared to”。“peaceful”应用作形容词，前面需加动词“feel”。

× And the wet weather will dirty my clothes.

✓ And wet weather will dirty my clothes.

句首连词“And”后不应加定冠词“the”，应直接使用“wet weather”。

× Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning or evening before I leaving for work.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning or evening before I leave for work.

动词“leave”应使用原形，因前有“before”引导的时间状语从句，谓语动词用一般现在时。

× I think it very helpful to me because I can prepare whether I can take an umbrella tomorrow.

✓ I think it is very helpful to me because I can prepare whether I need to take an umbrella tomorrow.

句子缺少系动词“is”，且“whether I can take”表达不准确，应为“whether I need to take”。

× For example, if Ryan is expected, I make sure I take the umbrella.

✓ For example, if rain is expected, I make sure I take an umbrella.

“Ryan”拼写错误，应为“rain”。冠词“the umbrella”改为“不定冠词an umbrella”，更符合习惯用法。

× In recent years, climate change has had a profound effects on the environment and the human life.

✓ In recent years, climate change has had profound effects on the environment and human life.

“a profound effects”中“effects”为复数，前面不应加不定冠词“a”。

× Firstly, we have with tied more frequent and service wider invent such as flaws or earthquake which have caused.

✓ Firstly, we have witnessed more frequent and severe events such as floods or earthquakes which have caused damage.

“have with tied”错误，应为“have witnessed”。“service wider invent”应为“severe and wider events”。“flaws”应为“floods”。句子结构混乱，需调整。

× Yes, I've of course I'd like to because I'm living in the northeast of China is cold and dry, so I want to go to the jungle, For example the Suzhou, Hangzhou and Chengdu.

✓ Yes, of course I'd like to because I live in the northeast of China, which is cold and dry, so I want to go to the jungle. For example, Suzhou, Hangzhou, and Chengdu.

“I've of course I'd like to”表达重复且错误，应为“of course I'd like to”。“I'm living”改为一般现在时“I live”。“the northeast of China is cold and dry”需用定语从句连接。城市名不加冠词。