Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and concise description of the weather patterns in your area, using correct sentence structures and linking words to organise your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: The weather where I live changes throughout the year. For example, we have cold winters from June to August, warm summers from December to February, and mild autumns in between. This variety makes the seasons quite distinct.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows your preference clearly but is a bit disorganised and has some unclear phrases. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting reasons, using linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because it makes me feel energetic and happy. For instance, sunny days inspire me to go outside and enjoy activities, which I find very uplifting.

Gợi ý: Your answer communicates your preference but has several grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to use correct vocabulary and sentence structures, and explain your reasons clearly with linking words.

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer dry weather because I dislike the rainy season. When it rains, my clothes get wet and heavy, which makes me feel uncomfortable and less motivated to go outside.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more organised. Use complete sentences and linking words to explain when and why you check the weather forecast.

Ví dụ: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day, especially before I go out. This helps me decide what to wear and whether to take an umbrella, so I can stay comfortable and dry.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a full response with specific examples of climate change effects, using correct vocabulary and sentence structures.

Ví dụ: I think climate change has caused more extreme weather in recent years. For example, summers have become hotter and winters colder, and some mountain areas have less snow than before.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows enthusiasm but is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to clearly express your interest in visiting different climates and give specific examples of places you have visited, using proper sentence structure.

Ví dụ: Of course, I love visiting cities with different climates. For instance, I have travelled to countries with cold climates, which are very different from where I live, and I enjoyed experiencing the change.

× The place where I live has different kind of weather.

✓ The place where I live has different kinds of weather.

The noun 'kind' should be plural 'kinds' because it refers to multiple types of weather. When talking about more than one type, the plural form is required.

× There is a winter, summer and autumn season, mostly from June to July.

✓ There are winter, summer and autumn seasons, mostly from June to July.

When listing multiple seasons, the verb 'is' should be plural 'are' and 'season' should be plural 'seasons' to agree with the plural subject.

× An August at winter, an after that for for other months.

✓ August is in winter, and after that, the other months are summer.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and articles. 'At winter' should be 'in winter' to indicate time. Also, the sentence structure is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× It's summer. Anne.

✓ It's summer, Anne.

The sentence likely addresses the examiner named Anne; a comma is needed to separate the address. No plural issue here, but punctuation correction is necessary.

× I'm the person who doesn't like cold weather Dartmouth, so I do prefer.

✓ I'm the person who doesn't like cold weather, so I do prefer hot or summer weather.

The word 'Dartmouth' seems misplaced or incorrect here. It should be removed or clarified. Also, the sentence is incomplete; the preference should be clearly stated.

× Hot or summer weather because it gives me more energy when I look around the bright sunny.

✓ Hot or summer weather because it gives me more energy when I look around at the bright sunny weather.

The phrase 'bright sunny' is incomplete; it needs a noun like 'weather' to be grammatically correct.

× Weather and it also gives me positive vibes. Along with that, and it inspires me to go out and do.

✓ It also gives me positive vibes and inspires me to go out and do things.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper structure. Combining them into a complete sentence improves clarity.

× Definitely, I do prefer drive.

✓ Definitely, I do prefer dry weather.

The word 'drive' is incorrect here; it should be 'dry' to describe the type of weather.

× Either I don't like rainy season, I don't like the floors or the parts getting wet 'cause because it will.

✓ I don't like the rainy season because I don't like the floors or parts getting wet.

The use of 'Either' is incorrect here. Also, 'cause because' is redundant; 'because' alone suffices.

× Make my cloth weight and it always gives me negative energy an I don't prefer going out when there is a wet weather.

✓ Make my clothes wet and it always gives me negative energy, so I don't prefer going out when the weather is wet.

'Cloth' should be plural 'clothes'. 'Weight' is incorrect; it should be 'wet'. Also, 'a wet weather' is incorrect; 'the weather is wet' is correct.

× Definitely, I do check weather everyday specially when I'm going out.

✓ Definitely, I do check the weather every day, especially when I'm going out.

'Check weather' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb). 'Specially' should be 'especially'.

× I do have to check the weather before I leave my house and it helps me to protect from getting wet from the rainy season and also when there is a brighter sunny weather it helps me too. Get.

✓ I have to check the weather before I leave my house because it helps me avoid getting wet during the rainy season, and when the weather is bright and sunny, it helps me too.

'Helps me to protect from getting wet' is awkward; 'helps me avoid getting wet' is better. 'Brighter sunny weather' should be 'bright and sunny weather'. The sentence ending 'helps me too. Get.' is incomplete and corrected.

× There has been a lot of FX and because of the climate change.

✓ There have been a lot of effects because of climate change.

'FX' is unclear; assuming it means 'effects'. 'There has been' should be 'There have been' to agree with plural 'effects'.

× The weather has been drastically changed and I personally think that during the summer it's too hard and even in the winter it's extremely cold.

✓ The weather has changed drastically, and I personally think that during the summer it's too hot and even in the winter it's extremely cold.

'Drastically changed' is better as 'changed drastically'. 'Too hard' is incorrect; it should be 'too hot' when referring to weather.

× Besides that, when I look to the mountains, there aren't.

✓ Besides that, when I look at the mountains, there aren't any animals.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Look to' should be 'look at'. The sentence needs a complete thought.

× Is of course I love to visit different cities where they have different climate.

✓ Of course, I love to visit different cities where they have different climates.

'Is of course' is incorrect; it should be 'Of course'. 'Different climate' should be plural 'different climates'.

× An along with that, I have traveled few countries which she had a very different climate than the place are.

✓ Along with that, I have traveled to a few countries which have very different climates than the place where I live.

'An along' is incorrect; should be 'Along'. 'Few countries' needs an article 'a few countries'. 'She had' is incorrect; should be 'which have'. 'Place are' is incorrect; should be 'place where I live'.

× I'll leave. I'll leave in the place where it has a very cold climate and I have been to the countries where they have X.

✓ I live in a place with a very cold climate, and I have been to countries where they have different climates.

'I'll leave' is incorrect; should be 'I live'. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; rephrasing improves clarity.