Part 1
Giám khảo
What's the weather like where you live?
Thí sinh
I live in the Philippines and the only weather. We have there is summer. That's why. People, art and. They go *****. They go to beaches every Sunday.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Thí sinh
Back when I was in the Philippines since the only whether there is hot weather. I really dream about. Living in a cold weather but then it cold country. But then when I arrive in a cold country. It really. I don't really want. And I prefer hot weather.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Thí sinh
I love wet weather. Specially. When I don't need to do anything and just to stay in bed, watch movies. And watching the rain. That's my. That feeling for me is very. Cozy.
Giám khảo
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Thí sinh
Before, I don't usually. Look for the weather forecast in a day. But then when I arrived in a cold country. Aye. Then to monitor. The degree of how cold it is, The weather. Today.
Giám khảo
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Thí sinh
I think. It affects that. In this year. Special in the Philippines. It's become very hotter and hotter. That's why people tend to have heat stroke.
Giám khảo
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Thí sinh
Probably yes. I live in the Philippines where the only climate this summer. I want to experience. Autumn, winter and spring. And take some photos. Crazy.
What's the weather like where you live?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Answer wa shizen de, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai. Kotae wa chokusetsu shitsumon ni kotaete, fukusetsu na jouhou wa rikai o fukameru tame ni tsukete kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I live in the Philippines, where it is mostly hot and sunny all year round. Because of this, many people enjoy going to the beach on weekends.' no you ni setsumei shite kudasai.
Ví dụ: I live in the Philippines, where the weather is mostly hot and sunny throughout the year. Because of this, people often go to the beach every Sunday to relax and enjoy the sun.
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Kotae wa motto seikaku ni shite, rikai shi yasui you ni setsumei shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I used to dream about living in a cold country because the Philippines is always hot. However, after I moved to a cold country, I realized I prefer hot weather.' no you ni shite kudasai.
Ví dụ: I used to dream about living in a cold country because the Philippines is always hot. However, after I moved to a cold country, I realized I prefer hot weather because it feels more comfortable to me.
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Kotae wa motto rensetsu shite, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I love wet weather, especially when I can stay in bed, watch movies, and listen to the rain. This makes me feel very cozy.' no you ni shite kudasai.
Ví dụ: I love wet weather, especially when I don't have to go out. I enjoy staying in bed, watching movies, and listening to the sound of rain because it feels very cozy to me.
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Kotae wa motto seikaku ni shite, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'Before, I didn't usually check the weather forecast during the day. But after I arrived in a cold country, I started to monitor the temperature daily to prepare for the cold.' no you ni shite kudasai.
Ví dụ: Before, I didn't usually check the weather forecast during the day. But after I arrived in a cold country, I started to check it every day to know how cold it will be and dress appropriately.
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Kotae wa motto rensetsu shite, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I think climate change has caused the weather in the Philippines to become hotter in recent years. As a result, more people suffer from heat stroke.' no you ni shite kudasai.
Ví dụ: I think climate change has made the weather in the Philippines hotter and hotter in recent years. Because of this, many people tend to have heat stroke during the hot days.
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Kotae wa motto seikaku ni shite, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. Since the Philippines has only summer weather, I want to experience autumn, winter, and spring, and take many photos.' no you ni shite kudasai.
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates. Because the Philippines has only summer weather, I want to experience autumn, winter, and spring, and take many photos of the beautiful seasons.
× I live in the Philippines and the only weather. We have there is summer.
✓ I live in the Philippines and the only weather we have there is summer.
The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper connection between clauses. Combining the clauses into one sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
× That's why. People, art and. They go *****.
✓ That's why people go out and they go to beaches every Sunday.
The original sentence is incomplete and contains unclear fragments. Completing the sentence with appropriate words and structure makes the meaning clear.
× They go to beaches every Sunday.
✓ They go to the beaches every Sunday.
Adding the definite article 'the' before 'beaches' specifies the beaches being referred to, improving sentence clarity.
× Back when I was in the Philippines since the only whether there is hot weather.
✓ Back when I was in the Philippines, the only weather there was hot weather.
The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. Adding a comma and rephrasing improves grammatical correctness and clarity.
× I really dream about. Living in a cold weather but then it cold country.
✓ I really dream about living in cold weather, but then in a cold country.
'Weather' is an uncountable noun and does not take an article here. Also, 'cold country' needs a preposition 'in' to be correct.
× But then when I arrive in a cold country. It really. I don't really want. And I prefer hot weather.
✓ But then when I arrived in a cold country, I realized I don't really like it, and I prefer hot weather.
The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper connection. Combining them into a coherent sentence with correct tense improves clarity.
× I love wet weather. Specially. When I don't need to do anything and just to stay in bed, watch movies.
✓ I love wet weather, especially when I don't need to do anything and can just stay in bed and watch movies.
'Specially' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'especially'. Also, sentence fragments are combined for clarity.
× And watching the rain. That's my. That feeling for me is very. Cozy.
✓ Watching the rain is my favorite feeling; for me, it is very cozy.
The original sentences are fragmented and incorrectly structured. Combining them and using correct verb forms improves readability.
× Before, I don't usually. Look for the weather forecast in a day.
✓ Before, I didn't usually look for the weather forecast during the day.
The original sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect tense. Using past tense and combining the sentence improves correctness.
× But then when I arrived in a cold country. Aye. Then to monitor. The degree of how cold it is, The weather. Today.
✓ But when I arrived in a cold country, I started to monitor how cold the weather is today.
The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them into a coherent sentence with proper structure improves clarity.
× I think. It affects that. In this year. Special in the Philippines.
✓ I think it has affected the Philippines especially this year.
The original sentences are fragmented and use incorrect word order. Combining and rephrasing improves grammatical correctness.
× It's become very hotter and hotter.
✓ It has become hotter and hotter.
'Hotter' is a comparative adjective and does not need 'very' before it. Using 'has become' is more appropriate for recent changes.
× That's why people tend to have heat stroke.
✓ That's why people tend to suffer from heat stroke.
The verb 'have' is less appropriate here; 'suffer from' is the correct collocation with 'heat stroke'.
× Probably yes. I live in the Philippines where the only climate this summer.
✓ Probably yes. I live in the Philippines where the only climate is summer.
The original sentence is missing the verb 'is' to complete the clause, making it grammatically incorrect.
× I want to experience. Autumn, winter and spring. And take some photos. Crazy.
✓ I want to experience autumn, winter, and spring, and take some photos. That would be crazy.
The original sentences are fragmented. Combining them and adding appropriate words improves clarity and grammatical correctness.