Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to organize your answer more clearly and avoid unclear or incorrect phrases. Use simple, correct sentences to describe the weather and its changes. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details logically connected with linking words.

Ví dụ: I live in Thailand, where the weather is mostly hot throughout the year. However, from November to December, it can be a bit cooler, especially in the mornings and evenings. During the afternoon, the weather usually becomes hot and dry. These changes make the weather quite interesting.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more fluent and coherent by connecting ideas with linking words. Also, clarify your reasons with specific examples and avoid incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: Since I live in Thailand where it is hot all year, I prefer cold weather. I enjoy cold weather because it allows me to wear more interesting clothes, like jackets and scarves. In contrast, hot weather makes it difficult to think and dress comfortably.

Gợi ý: Try to express your preferences clearly and use linking words to compare dry and wet weather. Also, avoid unclear phrases and provide specific reasons for your choice.

Ví dụ: I don't like very dry weather because it makes me feel thirsty and uncomfortable, so I have to carry extra water. However, if I have to choose, I prefer wet weather because it feels fresher and cooler, which I find more pleasant.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and clarity by completing your ideas and using linking words. Also, correct vocabulary errors and provide specific details about your habit.

Ví dụ: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because it often rains unexpectedly in Thailand. I usually check it twice a day to decide if I need to bring an umbrella or wear a raincoat. This helps me stay dry and avoid getting sick.

Gợi ý: Focus on clear and accurate vocabulary, and connect your ideas logically. Avoid unclear or incorrect words and provide specific examples of climate change effects.

Ví dụ: I think climate change has had a significant impact in recent years. For example, global warming has caused rising temperatures, which affect both the environment and wildlife. Additionally, extreme weather events like floods and droughts have become more frequent, which can be very harmful to people's lives.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more fluent and complete by using correct grammar and linking words. Provide clear reasons and avoid repetition or incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates, especially in Europe, such as Switzerland. I am interested in experiencing the four seasons, like autumn and spring, because the weather and scenery change beautifully. Also, I want to learn how people live and feel in different climates, which would give me a deeper understanding.

× I live in Thailand where the weather is mostly hot and she makes you happy here even though.

✓ I live in Thailand where the weather is mostly hot and makes you happy here even though.

The phrase 'she makes you happy' is incorrect because 'she' does not refer to anything in context. The correct subject is 'the weather' which is singular and should be used without 'she'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; removing 'she' corrects the sentence.

× Long winter monster chairs November to December.

✓ The long winter lasts from November to December.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Monster chairs' is likely a mishearing or typo. The correct phrase is 'lasts from November to December' to indicate the duration of the winter season.

× The money can be quite chilly and.

✓ The morning can be quite chilly.

'Money' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'morning'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs to be completed for clarity.

× Book, but afternoon you should become very hard and dry.

✓ But in the afternoon, it usually becomes very hot and dry.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Book' is likely a mishearing. The corrected sentence clarifies the time and weather condition.

× Those changes in temperature makes the weather.

✓ Those changes in temperature make the weather.

The subject 'changes' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' instead of 'makes' to agree in number.

× Like very interesting.

✓ like it very interesting.

The sentence fragment lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'it' completes the sentence.

× Since I live in Thailand where the weather gets hot all year long.

✓ Since I live in Thailand where the weather gets hot all year long,

This is a sentence fragment; it needs to be connected to the following sentence or completed to form a full sentence.

× I prefer living in cold there.

✓ I prefer living in cold places there.

The phrase 'living in cold there' is awkward and incomplete. Adding 'places' clarifies the meaning.

× Because.

✓ Because

The word 'Because' is used as a sentence fragment; it should be connected to the following sentence.

× I believe that all weather allows me to dress up more interesting and enough on a wig rather than.

✓ I believe that cold weather allows me to dress up more interestingly and wear a wig rather than in hot weather.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. 'All weather' is vague; 'cold weather' fits context. 'Interesting' should be 'interestingly' as an adverb modifying 'dress up'. 'Enough on a wig' is unclear; likely 'wear a wig' is intended.

× Wearing clothes in the hot weather because it's getting difficult to think.

✓ Wearing clothes in the hot weather is difficult because it's hard to think.

The original sentence is a fragment and unclear. Adding 'is difficult' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I don't really like living in either.

✓ I don't really like living in either weather.

The word 'either' needs a noun to refer to; adding 'weather' clarifies the meaning.

× Very dry will bear but better.

✓ Very dry weather is unbearable but better.

The phrase 'will bear but better' is incorrect. 'Unbearable' is the correct adjective to describe very dry weather.

× But if I have to choose I would prefer wet better.

✓ But if I have to choose, I would prefer wet weather.

The phrase 'wet better' is incorrect; 'wet weather' is the correct noun phrase.

× This is because dry weather often makes me feel thirsty and uncomfortable and I have to carry extra water out of time.

✓ This is because dry weather often makes me feel thirsty and uncomfortable, and I have to carry extra water all the time.

The phrase 'out of time' is incorrect; 'all the time' is the correct expression.

× On the other hand, weather feels fresher and cooler which I find more present who live in.

✓ On the other hand, wet weather feels fresher and cooler, which I find more pleasant to live in.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding 'wet' before 'weather' and correcting 'present' to 'pleasant' clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, checking the weather forecast is one of my daily habits because I live in Thailand where it often rain unexpectantly.

✓ Yes, checking the weather forecast is one of my daily habits because I live in Thailand where it often rains unexpectedly.

The verb 'rain' needs third person singular form 'rains' to agree with 'it'. 'Unexpectantly' is incorrect; 'unexpectedly' is the correct adverb.

× Usually check it twice a day to decide whether I need to bring an umbrella or wear a rainy cold as it will help me stay dry and avoid getting sick because getting sick can be very.

✓ I usually check it twice a day to decide whether I need to bring an umbrella or wear a raincoat, as it helps me stay dry and avoid getting sick because getting sick can be very unpleasant.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains errors: 'rainy cold' should be 'raincoat'; 'can be very' is incomplete; adding 'unpleasant' completes the thought.

× I think climate change has had a significant impact underworld in recent year.

✓ I think climate change has had a significant impact worldwide in recent years.

'Underworld' is incorrect; 'worldwide' is correct. 'Year' should be plural 'years' to match 'recent'.

× For example, global warming has caused rising temperature with us which affect both environment and wildlife.

✓ For example, global warming has caused rising temperatures that affect both the environment and wildlife.

'With us' is incorrect; 'that' is the correct relative pronoun. 'Temperature' should be plural 'temperatures'. 'Environment' needs the definite article 'the'.

× Additionally, extreme weather events like blood and routes have become more frequent, impacting human's life as well, which.

✓ Additionally, extreme weather events like floods and droughts have become more frequent, impacting human life as well, which

'Blood and routes' are incorrect; 'floods and droughts' is correct. 'Human's life' should be 'human life' without possessive.

× Can be very detrimental.

✓ can be very detrimental.

This is a sentence fragment; it should be connected to the previous sentence.

× I am really interested in experienced a four season such as autumns and spring.

✓ I am really interested in experiencing four seasons such as autumn and spring.

'Interested in experienced' is incorrect; 'interested in experiencing' is correct. 'A four season' should be 'four seasons'. 'Autumns' should be singular 'autumn'.

× Because the weather and scenery change so beautifully during these times, I also want to understand how people live and feel endorse climate, which would give me a deeper, deeper.

✓ Because the weather and scenery change so beautifully during these times, I also want to understand how people live and feel in those climates, which would give me a deeper understanding.

'Feel endorse climate' is incorrect; 'feel in those climates' is correct. The phrase 'a deeper, deeper' is incomplete; 'a deeper understanding' completes the thought.