Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强语法基础，避免重复表达，并且用更准确的词汇描述天气情况。

Ví dụ: I live in Guangdong, where the weather is usually humid and rainy throughout the year due to frequent monsoons.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议练习完整句子表达，明确表达偏好并给出理由。

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because I find cold weather uncomfortable, and living in a condo makes it easier to stay cool during summer.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简洁表达观点，并用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I don't like either dry or wet weather, but if I have to choose, I prefer wet weather because I am used to the humid climate in my city.

Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且语法错误较多，建议练习完整句子表达，清晰说明习惯和原因。

Ví dụ: I usually don't check the weather forecast because I rarely go outside and I am a bit lazy about it.

Gợi ý: 表达中存在双重否定和语法错误，建议使用正确的句式表达观点，并具体说明影响。

Ví dụ: I believe climate change has little impact on humans but greatly affects animals and the environment, especially in southern regions where ecosystems are changing.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和表达不清晰，建议避免重复，清楚表达愿望并给出具体原因。

Ví dụ: Definitely, I want to visit cities with different climates because I have never seen snow since childhood, and I am eager to experience snowy places.

× Well, currently I'm living in the Guangdong and this area is always wet and always full of the water because there are many rings during the year.

✓ Well, currently I'm living in Guangdong and this area is always wet and always full of water because there are many rains during the year.

“the Guangdong”中的“the”是不必要的，地名前通常不加定冠词；“the water”应为“water”，表示泛指水；“rings”应为“rains”，拼写错误。

× I'm actually. If I had a truth, I would prefer the. Hotter weather because I'm fair about the code, whether an because you know, I'm living in the condo and.

✓ I'm actually not sure. If I had to be truthful, I would prefer hotter weather because I'm afraid of the cold weather, and because you know, I live in the condo.

原句中“I'm actually.”不完整，应补充完整表达；“If I had a truth”应为“If I had to be truthful”，表达条件句；“the. Hotter weather”中“the.”多余且断句错误；“fair about the code”应为“afraid of the cold”，拼写和用词错误；“whether an”应为“weather, and”，拼写和连接词错误；“I'm living in the condo and”句尾不完整。

× Uhm actually I I don't like both but if I had to choose I would choice the wet weather because I'm I'm living. My city is always full of wet weather and dumb. Uhm.

✓ Uhm actually I don't like either, but if I had to choose I would choose the wet weather because my city is always full of wet weather and damp.

“don't like both”应为“don't like either”，表示两者都不喜欢；“would choice”应为“would choose”，动词形式错误；“I'm I'm living.”句子不完整；“dumb”应为“damp”，拼写错误。

× Well, I actually, I don't really used to check the weather forecast because I I am quite lazy and I actually. Am I really go out so? I don't.

✓ Well, actually, I don't really use to check the weather forecast because I am quite lazy and I don't really go out, so I don't.

“don't really used to”应为“don't really use to”，动词形式错误；“I actually. Am I really go out so?”句子结构混乱，应改为“I don't really go out, so I don't.”。

× Come come, I think the climate change almost don't have no impact on the human beings, but it have a great impact on the on the animals and the environment. For example in the South, in the South edge of my of the earth.

✓ Well, I think climate change almost doesn't have any impact on human beings, but it has a great impact on animals and the environment. For example, in the southern edge of my country.

“the climate change”中“the”多余；“don't have no”是双重否定，应为“doesn't have any”；“human beings”可简化为“human beings”；“it have”应为“it has”，主谓一致错误；“on the on the animals”重复；“in the South, in the South edge of my of the earth”表达不清，应改为“in the southern edge of my country”。

× Definitely, I would like to visit many cities that have different climates from where I live because I never seen the snow since my childhood, since my childhood to now. So I'm really into traveling to the city warehouse.

✓ Definitely, I would like to visit many cities that have different climates from where I live because I have never seen snow since my childhood. So I'm really into traveling to cities with snow.

“I never seen”应为“I have never seen”，现在完成时；“since my childhood to now”重复且冗余；“traveling to the city warehouse”表达不清，应改为“traveling to cities with snow”更符合语境。