Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误和用词不当，如“melt in”应改为“mild”。同时，句子结构应更自然流畅，避免断句过短。

Ví dụ: I live in China, which has a temperate climate with four distinct seasons. Spring and autumn are mild, winter is cold and snowy, and summer is hot.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在多处语法和表达错误，建议使用简单明了的句子表达观点，并提供具体原因。

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because I feel uncomfortable when it's cold. It takes me a long time to warm up, and I often need to use the air conditioner to stay comfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且有语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体细节支持。

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for outdoor activities. My hometown is usually dry, which suits my lifestyle well.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，但语法和表达稍显生硬，建议使用更自然的表达方式并注意时态一致。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before going out. This helps me decide what clothes to wear and whether I need to bring an umbrella.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清晰，建议使用准确的词汇和句子结构，具体说明气候变化的影响。

Ví dụ: I think climate change has caused higher temperatures and earlier heat waves. As a result, we often need to use air conditioning to stay comfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和拼写错误，如“code wiser”应为“cold weather”。建议表达更完整，提供具体活动细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love traveling and enjoy visiting cities with different climates. Since my hometown is usually warm, I like to visit northeastern China to experience the cold weather and try activities like ice skating.

× There are 4 distinct seasons every year.

✓ There are 4 distinct seasons every year.

该句无单复数错误，保持原句。

× And the temperature of spring and autumn is melt in, the winter is cold and snowy, and the summer is hot.

✓ And the temperature in spring and autumn is mild, the winter is cold and snowy, and the summer is hot.

介词使用错误，应该用'in spring and autumn'表示在春季和秋季，且'melt in'应为'mild'，表示温和。

× I prefer hot weather because I'm a person where will freed of code.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I'm a person who will be free of cold.

关系代词使用错误，'where'应为'who'，且表达应为'free of cold'，表示不怕冷。

× If I feel cold, it will take a long time time to make me or again.

✓ If I feel cold, it will take a long time to warm me up again.

表达不准确，'make me or again'无意义，应改为'warm me up again'，表示使我重新暖和起来。

× In cold weather we can only need to open the air condition to make us a conferable I think.

✓ In cold weather, we only need to turn on the air conditioner to make us comfortable, I think.

介词和词汇使用错误，'open the air condition'应为'turn on the air conditioner'，'conferable'拼写错误，应为'comfortable'。

× I prefer dry weather because it is more confortable and convenient for all the activities and I'm a person worried too or we like to go outside.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for all activities, and I'm a person who likes to go outside.

拼写错误，'confortable'应为'comfortable'，句子结构混乱，'worried too or we like to go outside'应改为'who likes to go outside'。

× To be to be honest, my hometown so wiser is always dry but my own call the visor as my college is always wide so I only need to.

✓ To be honest, my hometown is always dry, but my college town is always wet, so I only need to...

句子结构混乱，'so wiser'和'call the visor'无意义，应改为'...is always dry'和'...is always wet'，表达清晰。

× I would morning before I go outside I will check the forecast to determine what clothes I need to wear and if I need to take the umbrella with me.

✓ In the morning before I go outside, I check the forecast to determine what clothes I need to wear and if I need to take an umbrella with me.

句子结构不完整，'I would morning'错误，应改为'In the morning'，且时态统一为一般现在时。

× I will check the forecast to determine what clothes I need to wear and if I need to take the umbrella with me.

✓ I will check the forecast to determine what clothes I need to wear and if I need to take an umbrella with me.

冠词使用错误，'the umbrella'应为'an umbrella'，因为这里指的是任意一把伞。

× I think the climate change has had profound impacts on our society and the environment, for example, the high temperature.

✓ I think climate change has had profound impacts on our society and the environment, for example, high temperatures.

'the climate change'中的定冠词不必要，应为'climate change'，且'high temperature'应为复数'high temperatures'。

× Highs comp came more earlier than before so that we need to turn on the air condition to keep us more comfortable as they say.

✓ High temperatures come earlier than before, so we need to turn on the air conditioner to keep ourselves more comfortable, as they say.

词汇和介词错误，'Highs comp came more earlier'应为'High temperatures come earlier'，'air condition'应为'air conditioner'，'keep us more comfortable'改为'keep ourselves more comfortable'。

× Yes, I really love traveling so I like to visit other cities that have different climates.

✓ Yes, I really love traveling, so I like to visit other cities that have different climates.

该句无明显代词错误，保持原句。

× The area I live in China is often warm, so I like to go to the northeast of China to experience the code wiser and do the activities like.

✓ The area I live in China is often warm, so I like to go to the northeast of China to experience the cold weather and do activities like ice kite flying.

拼写错误，'code wiser'应为'cold weather'，句子不完整，补充完整表达。

× Ice Kite.

✓ Ice kite flying.

短语不完整，应补充动词使表达完整。