Part 1
Giám khảo
What's the weather like where you live?
Thí sinh
This is very dry and the temperature of night into midday is very different and genetically agency. He passed it off turn. George, Heather.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Thí sinh
I think I prefer the cold weather because you can vary some clothes. Will you fail code that will be very out? You can't do anything except. To use the. Weather conditions.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Thí sinh
No, I don't prefer other drawing, that's better I think. Dry, it's very. Urge you to drink more water is very beautiful eyes to study in college is verified for you to go to every year if it rains.
Giám khảo
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Thí sinh
I think I don't always check the weather apps in my phones. I'm have the habit to stay the weather before I go out. If the weather isn't so Sony I will check the weather ask to save. If it rains or not.
Giám khảo
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Thí sinh
I think the influence is obvious. The weather in summer is becoming too hard and the weather in code become to code. So it makes people hard to live without the techniques like weather conditions.
Giám khảo
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Thí sinh
Of course, of course, I always imagine to travel to the area near the Tropic, I think is very different from the weather I live and I don't see any things like this. I want to see the weather which have was. Mysteries all the year round.
What's the weather like where you live?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你的回答缺乏连贯性和清晰的表达,句子结构混乱,导致意思难以理解。建议练习用简单明了的句子描述天气状况,并注意语法和词汇的准确使用。
Ví dụ: The weather where I live is very dry. The temperature changes a lot from night to midday, which can be quite uncomfortable.
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和不连贯的表达,建议用完整的句子直接表达喜好,并给出具体原因。
Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because I can wear different layers of clothing. In hot weather, it is often uncomfortable and limits outdoor activities.
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱且不相关,缺乏针对问题的具体描述。建议明确表达偏好,并用具体理由支持。
Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because it is easier to go outside and do activities. Wet weather can be inconvenient and make it difficult to travel.
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清,建议用简单句子说明习惯和频率,并注意时态和词汇的正确使用。
Ví dụ: I usually check the weather forecast on my phone before I go out. If the weather looks bad, I check it more often to prepare for rain or cold.
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不清,词汇使用不当。建议用准确的词汇描述气候变化的影响,并给出具体例子。
Ví dụ: I think climate change has caused summers to become hotter and winters colder. This makes it difficult for people to live without modern technology to adapt.
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答较为重复且表达不够清晰。建议用连贯的句子表达愿望,并具体说明想去的地方和原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit cities near the Tropics because their climate is very different from mine. I am curious to experience warm weather and tropical nature all year round.
× This is very dry and the temperature of night into midday is very different and genetically agency.
✓ It is very dry, and the temperature from night to midday is very different and generally changing.
句子结构混乱,缺少主语和谓语的清晰搭配,导致表达不清晰。建议理清句子结构,明确主语和谓语,使句子通顺。
× He passed it off turn. George, Heather.
✓ (该句语义不明,无法准确纠正)
该句语义不清,缺乏完整的句子结构,无法判断具体语法错误,建议重写句子以表达清楚意思。
× Will you fail code that will be very out?
✓ Will you feel cold? That will be very uncomfortable.
情态动词使用错误,原句中“fail”应为“feel”,且句子不完整,需补充完整表达。
× You can't do anything except. To use the. Weather conditions.
✓ You can't do anything except use the weather conditions.
句子结构错误,断句不当,导致表达不完整。建议合并句子,保持连贯。
× No, I don't prefer other drawing, that's better I think.
✓ No, I don't prefer other weather; I think dry is better.
代词使用错误,“other drawing”应为“other weather”,且句子表达不清,需明确指代。
× Dry, it's very. Urge you to drink more water is very beautiful eyes to study in college is verified for you to go to every year if it rains.
✓ Dry weather makes you drink more water. It is very beautiful to study in college, and it is good for you to go every year if it rains.
句子结构混乱,多个句子拼接不当,导致语义不清。建议拆分句子,理清逻辑关系。
× I think I don't always check the weather apps in my phones.
✓ I think I don't always check the weather apps on my phone.
代词使用错误,“in my phones”应为“on my phone”,因为应用程序通常安装在手机上。
× I'm have the habit to stay the weather before I go out.
✓ I have the habit of checking the weather before I go out.
句子结构错误,“I'm have”不正确,应使用“I have”,且“stay the weather”应为“checking the weather”。
× If the weather isn't so Sony I will check the weather ask to save.
✓ If the weather isn't so sunny, I will check the weather app to be sure.
形容词使用错误,“Sony”应为“sunny”,且“weather ask”应为“weather app”。
× The weather in summer is becoming too hard and the weather in code become to code.
✓ The weather in summer is becoming too hot, and the weather in cold becomes too cold.
时态和词汇错误,“hard”应为“hot”,“code”应为“cold”,且动词需与主语一致。
× So it makes people hard to live without the techniques like weather conditions.
✓ So it makes it hard for people to live without technologies like weather control.
量词和词汇使用错误,“techniques like weather conditions”表达不当,应为“technologies like weather control”。
× I always imagine to travel to the area near the Tropic, I think is very different from the weather I live and I don't see any things like this.
✓ I always imagine traveling to the area near the Tropics. I think it is very different from the weather where I live, and I haven't seen anything like this.
代词使用错误,“I think is”应为“I think it is”,“any things”应为“anything”,且动词形式需调整。
× I want to see the weather which have was. Mysteries all the year round.
✓ I want to see the weather which is mysterious all year round.
形容词使用错误,“have was mysteries”不正确,应为“is mysterious”,且句子结构需调整。