Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to directly answer the question first, then add specific details about the weather using simple and correct vocabulary. Avoid unclear or incorrect words like 'metformin' and 'level lap up'. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I live in a village called Millibar, which is vibrant and beautiful. The weather there is generally pleasant, with mild summers that allow us to enjoy outdoor activities. In winter, it is not very cold, so it is comfortable to stay outside. Overall, the climate is quite agreeable throughout the year.

Gợi ý: Your answer should be more concise and directly address the preference. Use correct grammar and vocabulary, and explain reasons clearly with linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because I have liked it since childhood. It is comfortable for playing outdoor games, which helps me stay mentally and physically active.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Choose one preference and explain it clearly with specific reasons. Use appropriate vocabulary and linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because it has less humidity, which makes it more comfortable to play outdoor games. Also, dry weather is better for my skin as it does not cause irritation.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many mistakes. Try to answer directly whether you check the weather forecast, how often, and why. Use simple sentences and correct vocabulary to express your ideas clearly.

Ví dụ: I usually check the weather forecast a few days in advance. This helps me plan my activities and avoid any problems caused by bad weather.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and better grammar. Use linking words to connect your points logically. Be specific about the effects of climate change and avoid confusing phrases.

Ví dụ: In my opinion, climate change has caused a significant increase in temperatures recently due to global warming. People are cutting down trees to build cities, which leads to deforestation and worsens the climate conditions.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows enthusiasm but is unclear and repetitive. Try to express your ideas in a simple, direct way with correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your sentences and provide specific reasons for your interest.

Ví dụ: I am fascinated by traveling to different countries, so I would love to visit places with different climates. This would allow me to experience new environments and learn how people adapt to their weather conditions.

× It is a view of mountain from it and it is the climatic conditions very impeccable.

✓ There is a view of the mountain from it and the climatic conditions are very impeccable.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'It is' instead of 'There is' to indicate existence. Also, 'mountain' needs a definite article 'the' as it refers to a specific mountain. 'Climatic conditions' is plural and requires the plural verb 'are'.

× It is and it is not very metformin summer so we can play and level lap up enjoying outdoor activities and there is a not much cold in cold season.

✓ It is not very hot in summer so we can play and enjoy outdoor activities, and there is not much cold in the cold season.

The phrase 'metformin summer' is incorrect; likely intended 'hot in summer'. 'Level lap up' is incorrect and replaced with 'enjoy'. 'There is a not much cold' is incorrect; correct form is 'there is not much cold'. Also, 'cold season' needs the definite article 'the'.

× Well, in my perception I always prefer cold weather becaused I from childhood I always like possesses cold weather because of its climate conditions.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I have always preferred cold weather because since childhood I have liked cold weather because of its climatic conditions.

'In my perception' is better expressed as 'in my opinion'. 'Becaused' is incorrect; correct is 'because'. 'I from childhood I always like possesses cold weather' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'since childhood I have liked cold weather'. 'Possesses' is incorrect here. 'Climate conditions' should be 'climatic conditions'.

× There is a no problem of being playing outdoor games which gives me a mental and physical awareness about it.

✓ There is no problem playing outdoor games which gives me mental and physical awareness.

'There is a no problem' is incorrect; correct is 'There is no problem'. 'Being playing' is incorrect; 'playing' alone suffices. 'Awareness about it' is better as 'awareness'.

× Well, in my perception I prefer both dire wet weather, but there is an exceptional case that I like dry very much.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I prefer both dry and wet weather, but in exceptional cases, I like dry weather very much.

'Dire wet weather' is incorrect; should be 'dry and wet weather'. 'There is an exceptional case' is better as 'in exceptional cases'. 'I like dry very much' is incomplete; corrected to 'I like dry weather very much'.

× Because of his climatique condition, there is a no much humidity and emotion in the air so that we can enjoy playing outdoor games very in a very efficient way and there is a no cost to skin.

✓ Because of its climatic condition, there is not much humidity and moisture in the air so that we can enjoy playing outdoor games very efficiently and there is no harm to the skin.

'His' is incorrect pronoun for 'climatic condition'; should be 'its'. 'A no much' is incorrect; correct is 'not much'. 'Emotion' is incorrect; likely meant 'moisture'. 'Very in a very efficient way' is redundant; corrected to 'very efficiently'. 'No cost to skin' is incorrect; corrected to 'no harm to the skin'.

× Well, I'm not such a socialized person, but I keep an eye on weather, climatic conditions, I always get the information of what the climate should be changed in some few days so I can make the Riemann for it and there is no damage fraud or for the forever home and not efficient way.

✓ Well, I'm not a very social person, but I keep an eye on the weather and climatic conditions. I always get information about how the climate will change in a few days so I can make arrangements for it and avoid any damage or inconvenience in an efficient way.

'Socialized person' is incorrect; 'social person' is better. 'Keep an eye on weather, climatic conditions' needs 'the' before 'weather'. 'Information of what the climate should be changed' is incorrect; corrected to 'information about how the climate will change'. 'Make the Riemann' is unclear; likely 'make arrangements'. 'Damage fraud or for the forever home and not efficient way' is unclear; corrected to 'avoid any damage or inconvenience in an efficient way'.

× Do my mind, I think that there is a huge amount of climate it any recent there because of global warming.

✓ In my mind, I think that there has been a huge amount of climate change recently because of global warming.

'Do my mind' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'In my mind'. 'Climate it any recent there' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'climate change recently'. 'There is' changed to 'there has been' to indicate recent past event.

× People are cutting trees and building their own home city because it is the against their climate conditions.

✓ People are cutting trees and building their own homes and cities even though it goes against their climate conditions.

'Building their own home city' is unclear; corrected to 'homes and cities'. 'Because it is the against' is incorrect; corrected to 'even though it goes against'.

× So I think that in the later years there is a huge increase in temperatures which led to some deforestation.

✓ So I think that in the later years there will be a huge increase in temperatures which will lead to some deforestation.

'There is' should be future tense 'there will be' to match 'in the later years'. 'Led' is past tense; should be future 'will lead'.

× Where I am always fascinated in traveling different countries, so I would love for.

✓ I am always fascinated by traveling to different countries, so I would love to do so.

'Where I am' is incorrect; corrected to 'I am'. 'Fascinated in' should be 'fascinated by'. 'Traveling different countries' needs 'to' after 'traveling'. 'I would love for' is incomplete; corrected to 'I would love to do so'.

× So I would like to visit other countries which have different climates.

✓ I would like to visit other countries that have different climates.

'Which' is used for non-restrictive clauses; 'that' is preferred for restrictive clauses defining the countries.

× I visit there to experience a different type of feeling.

✓ I want to visit there to experience a different type of feeling.

The sentence lacks proper tense and subject intention; 'I visit' should be 'I want to visit' to express future desire.

× So with the person their country feels and knows the information and analyzing them that how they survive in their climate conditions.

✓ So, by experiencing the country, a person feels and understands the information and analyzes how people survive in their climate conditions.

The original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect pronouns. 'With the person their country feels' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'by experiencing the country, a person feels'. 'Knows the information and analyzing them' is incorrect; corrected to 'understands the information and analyzes'. 'That how they survive' corrected to 'how people survive'.