Part 1
Giám khảo
What's the weather like where you live?
Thí sinh
A living even improving since there was there well. A suit board weather. And the. So, virtual living. And the many retire. Wait, wait, wait, Iron Man. Was there too.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Thí sinh
I prefer hurt. Hot because I like summer. As a time I can. Go coastal city. Or are the two and choose assist say with my friends. And we get swimming. And the.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Thí sinh
I prefer dry basil because it's generally will have borne the company. For daily activities of example, I found it easier to go outside and exercise without a worry in public anywhere or slaving. Additional dry weather tend to be sunny here, which are both my mood and energy levels.
Giám khảo
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Thí sinh
Not really. I haven't this habit because I I I'm more I'm a shiny. I don't I just like to go out outside an an. Please. I prefer stay. Indoor.
Giám khảo
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Thí sinh
I recently. Brother normal heart. And the. Global warming. Flowering. The air pollution.
Giám khảo
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Thí sinh
Of course, because I living southwest. For 20 years. And never seeing snow. And I want you. Goes the.
What's the weather like where you live?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏连贯性和明确性,建议练习用简单句直接描述天气状况,避免无关内容。
Ví dụ: The weather where I live is usually warm and sunny. It rarely rains, and the temperature is comfortable most of the year.
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰,建议用完整句子表达喜好,并用连接词组织细节。
Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy summer. During that time, I often go to coastal cities with my friends, and we like swimming together.
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和词汇错误,建议使用正确表达并增加具体细节,使用连接词使内容连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because it is usually sunny, which makes me feel energetic. For example, I can easily go outside to exercise without worrying about rain.
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且信息不完整,建议直接回答问题并说明原因,使用完整句子。
Ví dụ: I don't usually check the weather forecast because I prefer to go outside spontaneously. Sometimes I stay indoors if the weather is bad.
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Điểm: 15.0Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱且缺乏具体信息,建议学习相关词汇并用完整句子表达观点。
Ví dụ: I think climate change has caused global warming and increased air pollution, which affects our health and the environment.
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清,建议用完整句子说明原因并具体描述想去的地方。
Ví dụ: Of course, I would like to visit cities with different climates. I have lived in the southwest for 20 years and have never seen snow, so I want to experience snowy places.
× A living even improving since there was there well.
✓ Living conditions have been improving since then.
原句结构混乱,缺少主语和谓语,导致句子不完整。应使用完整句子表达意思。
× A suit board weather.
✓ The weather is suitable.
原句中'suit board'用法错误,应使用形容词'suitable'来描述天气。
× And the. So, virtual living.
✓ So, virtual living is common.
句子不完整,缺少谓语和主语,需补充完整表达。
× And the many retire.
✓ And many retirees live here.
原句中'retire'用作名词时应为'retirees',且句子缺少谓语。
× Wait, wait, wait, Iron Man. Was there too.
✓ Wait, Iron Man was there too.
句子中断,重复词语无意义,应简化并补充完整。
× I prefer hurt.
✓ I prefer hot weather.
'hurt'是动词,错误使用,应为形容词'hot'。
× As a time I can.
✓ In summer, I can go to coastal cities.
句子不完整,缺少谓语和宾语,需补充完整。
× Or are the two and choose assist say with my friends.
✓ Or go to the beach and chat with my friends.
原句中介词和词语搭配错误,应使用正确的介词和表达方式。
× And we get swimming.
✓ And we go swimming.
动词搭配错误,应使用'go swimming'表达去游泳。
× I prefer dry basil because it's generally will have borne the company.
✓ I prefer dry weather because it is generally better for company.
'basil'用错,且句子结构混乱,需用正确词汇和表达。
× For daily activities of example, I found it easier to go outside and exercise without a worry in public anywhere or slaving.
✓ For example, for daily activities, I find it easier to go outside and exercise without worrying about the weather.
句子结构混乱,表达不清,需调整语序和用词。
× Additional dry weather tend to be sunny here, which are both my mood and energy levels.
✓ Additionally, dry weather tends to be sunny here, which improves both my mood and energy levels.
介词和动词形式错误,需使用正确的介词和动词单复数形式。
× I haven't this habit because I I I'm more I'm a shiny.
✓ I don't have this habit because I am more spontaneous.
情态动词和动词形式错误,需使用正确的情态动词和表达。
× I don't I just like to go out outside an an. Please.
✓ I just like to go outside and relax.
介词和词语重复错误,需简化并使用正确介词。
× I prefer stay. Indoor.
✓ I prefer to stay indoors.
动词不定式缺失,'indoor'应为副词形式'indoors'。
× I recently. Brother normal heart. And the. Global warming. Flowering. The air pollution.
✓ Recently, I have noticed global warming and air pollution becoming more serious.
句子断裂,缺少主谓结构,需合并并补充完整。
× Of course, because I living southwest. For 20 years.
✓ Of course, because I have been living in the southwest for 20 years.
动词时态错误,缺少介词,需使用现在完成进行时和正确介词。
× And never seeing snow.
✓ And I have never seen snow.
缺少主语和谓语,需补充完整句子。
× And I want you. Goes the.
✓ And I want to go there.
句子不完整,动词形式错误,需使用不定式表达愿望。