Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, and correct grammar (e.g., 'prefer writing on a laptop' not 'prefer to writing'). Use one or two brief supporting reasons and a linking word for coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I write quite a lot. I usually use a laptop because the keyboard is smoother and faster than a desktop, so it helps me finish tasks more quickly.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear direct answer (e.g., 'I mainly write work emails'). Improve grammar and clarity: use correct tense and connectors. Explain briefly why and give one specific example of email content.

Ví dụ: I mainly write work-related emails. Every day I send progress updates and task reports to my manager and colleagues so we all know the status of projects and any problems that need attention.

Gợi ý: Provide a clearer topic sentence and use linking words to explain exceptions. Correct grammar (use 'do not'/'don't', 'change', 'however'). Give a specific example of how professional emails differ.

Ví dụ: Generally, I don't think what I write will change much. However, my professional emails to my manager are more formal and detailed, while messages to colleagues are shorter and more casual.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid unrelated childhood detail unless it supports the point. Fix grammar and remove typos. Use one linking word to contrast past and present and give a brief reason for preferring typing.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing rather than handwriting. Although I used to write by hand at school, now I type at work because it is faster and easier to edit and share documents.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct frequency statement (e.g., 'I don't keep a daily diary, but...'). Make details specific and grammatical; use linking words to list examples. Clarify what you record and why.

Ví dụ: I don't keep a daily diary, but I note important dates in my diary. For example, I record birthdays, family anniversaries and important work deadlines so I don't forget them.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and simple structured supporting details. Correct grammar and remove irrelevant or confusing phrases. Mention one or two clear methods (photos, apps) and explain briefly why you use them.

Ví dụ: I usually record my life by taking photos and saving them on my phone. I also use the gallery and simple apps to organize trip photos and memories so I can look back on them easily.

× I write a lot on paper, sometimes on keyboard, but I prefer to write on the laptop keyboard because it's smooth as compared to the desktop.

✓ I write a lot on paper and sometimes on a keyboard, but I prefer to type on my laptop keyboard because it is smoother than a desktop keyboard.

Incorrect and inconsistent prepositions and articles: 'on keyboard' and 'on the laptop keyboard' should use 'on a keyboard' or 'on my laptop keyboard'. 'Write on the keyboard' is awkward; 'type' is more natural. 'Smooth as compared to the desktop' uses incorrect comparative structure; use 'smoother than a desktop keyboard'. Use articles 'a' or 'my' where needed and compare with 'than' not 'as compared to'.

× Nowadays, usually people prefer to writing on the technology as compared to paper.

✓ Nowadays, people usually prefer writing on technology to using paper.

Article and gerund issues: 'prefer to writing' is incorrect; use 'prefer writing' or 'prefer to write'. 'on the technology' misuses article and preposition; say 'on technology' or 'using technology'. Use 'to' for comparisons ('prefer A to B') rather than 'as compared to'.

× I don't like to write emails in daily visa because it's related to my work.

✓ I don't like writing personal emails daily because they are related to my work.

Word choice and adverb placement: 'in daily visa' is incorrect and unclear. Likely intended 'daily' or 'on a daily basis' and 'personal' or 'daily emails'. Use gerund 'writing' after 'like'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'emails...they are'.

× Everyday I write emails to my senior manager as well as to my colleagues because to know about what the condition of the work performance in my office.

✓ Every day I write emails to my senior manager and my colleagues to report on the work performance in my office.

Tense is present but sentence has infinitive misuse and awkward phrasing: 'because to know about what the condition of the work performance' is ungrammatical. Use purpose phrasing 'to report on' or 'to inform them about' and correct 'Every day' (two words) and conjunction 'and' instead of 'as well as' for simple list.

× No, I think the things I write not change.

✓ No, I think the things I write do not change.

Auxiliary verb missing for negation in present simple: English requires 'do not' (don't) with plural or base-form verbs. 'Not change' alone is incorrect without 'do'.

× They're usually the same as compared to earlier, but some of the changes that occur at the time of professional emails, which usually I send to my manager as compared to my colleagues.

✓ They are usually the same as before, but some changes occur in professional emails that I usually send to my manager rather than to my colleagues.

Awkward comparative phrasing and clause order: 'as compared to earlier' should be 'as before' or 'than before'. Relative clause order incorrect; 'which usually I send' should be 'that I usually send'. Use 'rather than' for contrast.

× Yes, I prefer typing as compared to handwriting.

✓ Yes, I prefer typing to handwriting.

Incorrect comparative construction: use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A as compared to B'.

× When I was a child I usually 2 handwriting on the paper with my schoolwork.

✓ When I was a child I usually did handwriting on paper for my schoolwork.

Garbled text and missing verb: '2' is likely an error; use 'did handwriting' or better 'wrote by hand'. 'on the paper' should be 'on paper' or 'on sheets of paper'. Maintain past tense 'did/wrote'.

× But nowadays I am writing on the laptop regarding my workplace work to my manager.

✓ But nowadays I write on my laptop about work to my manager.

Awkward continuous tense and word repetition: 'am writing on the laptop regarding my workplace work to my manager' is wordy. Present simple 'I write' fits habitual action; use 'on my laptop' and 'about work'.

× I usually write important dates in my Diaries, for example, my birthday dates, my mother birthday date, my family date of all families, take off both and my important work.

✓ I usually write important dates in my diary, for example, my birthday, my mother's birthday, family members' birthdays, days off, and important work deadlines.

Incorrect pluralization and article use: 'Diaries' should be singular 'diary' if referring to one; list items need correct possessive forms: 'my mother's birthday', 'family members' birthdays'. 'take off both' is unclear—interpreted as 'days off'. Use parallel list form.

× Doesn't matter, I usually start my life to take the selfie with my family and my friends who pay for my movies whenever I go to the whenever I was going to the trip and tomorrow I was going to the trip I saved that to self either photos in my phone.

✓ It doesn't matter; I usually take selfies with my family and friends whenever I go on a trip, and I save those photos on my phone.

Multiple issues: missing subject 'It doesn't matter', incorrect infinitive 'start my life to take', tense confusion 'whenever I go to the whenever I was going', and word order. Simplify to present habitual 'I usually take selfies... whenever I go on a trip' and 'save those photos on my phone'. Use correct pronouns and plural forms ('those photos').