Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you write a lot?

Thí sinh

Definitely when I was very young in the school, I write a lot of English sentences like social study notes or science notes. So I personally I do write a lot.

Giám khảo

What do you like to write? Why?

Thí sinh

I personally like to write, maybe writing because there are lots of English words I can think about and copyright. So sometimes I will get a computer for typing my writing story. Like I personally like scares.

Giám khảo

Do you think the things you write would change?

Thí sinh

I'm don't think I write The thing is change because when I was young my letter is kind of ugly and now I think I have little bit good letter.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Thí sinh

I usually authenticating more than handwriting because typing is my convenience. To write it, I mean to type it because in 2025 we need technology. Most of the people use technology to do something. So I personally like typing.

Giám khảo

How often do you keep diaries?

Thí sinh

I often write a Diaries in Canada like Calgary because there are lots of interesting places I didn't know. So I personally often write a diary when I was at night. It's so convenient to sleep when I was writing then sleeping.

Giám khảo

What other methods do you use to record your life?

Thí sinh

I use computer to type or use a random diary book to write my diary life.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不准确，且表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态，并简洁明了地回答问题。

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to write a lot when I was in school, especially notes for subjects like social studies and science.

What do you like to write? Why?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容不清晰，表达混乱，缺乏逻辑。建议明确表达喜欢写什么，并给出具体原因，避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: I enjoy writing stories because it allows me to use new English words and express my creativity. Sometimes, I type them on my computer for convenience.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议使用正确的语法结构，清晰表达观点。

Ví dụ: I don't think the content I write will change much, but my handwriting has improved since I was young.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 表达不自然且有语法错误，内容重复。建议简洁明了地表达偏好，并给出合理理由。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it is more convenient and faster, especially since technology is widely used nowadays.

How often do you keep diaries?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，时态和语法错误较多。建议使用正确时态，表达清晰，避免重复。

Ví dụ: I often write a diary at night, especially when I travel to interesting places like Calgary in Canada.

What other methods do you use to record your life?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 表达简单且不够具体。建议丰富细节，使用连贯的句子表达。

Ví dụ: I usually record my life by typing on my computer or writing in a diary book.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Definitely when I was very young in the school, I write a lot of English sentences like social study notes or science notes.

✓ Definitely when I was very young in school, I wrote a lot of English sentences like social study notes or science notes.

这里描述的是过去的动作，应该使用过去时态。原句中使用了现在时write，应该改为过去时wrote。

Singular and plural issue

× Definitely when I was very young in the school, I write a lot of English sentences like social study notes or science notes.

✓ Definitely when I was very young in school, I wrote a lot of English sentences like social studies notes or science notes.

“social study notes”应为复数形式“social studies notes”，因为指的是多个学科的笔记。

Present tense issue

× So I personally I do write a lot.

✓ So I personally do write a lot.

句中多余的“I”应删除，保持句子结构正确。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Definitely when I was very young in the school, I write a lot of English sentences like social study notes or science notes.

✓ Definitely when I was very young at school, I wrote a lot of English sentences like social studies notes or science notes.

“in the school”应改为“at school”，表示在学校这个环境中。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× So I personally I do write a lot.

✓ So I personally do write a lot.

句中重复使用“I”，应去掉多余的“I”。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I personally like to write, maybe writing because there are lots of English words I can think about and copyright.

✓ I personally like writing because there are lots of English words I can think about and copy.

“maybe writing”表达不清，应直接用动名词“writing”。“copyright”用错，应该是“copy”，表示抄写。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× So sometimes I will get a computer for typing my writing story.

✓ So sometimes I will use a computer to type my writing story.

“get a computer for typing”表达不自然，应改为“use a computer to type”。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Like I personally like scares.

✓ Like I personally like scary stories.

“scares”用法错误，应改为“scary stories”表示“恐怖故事”。

Incorrect use of pronouns