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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you write a lot?

Thí sinh

Yes, I often write a lot. For example, I write a letter for my boyfriend. It makes his happy.

Giám khảo

What do you like to write? Why?

Thí sinh

I like to like my love for my boyfriend because umm. Just talking in chat is not enough. I want to communicate.

Giám khảo

Do you think the things you write would change?

Thí sinh

No, I don't think the thing I liked would change because this is the luxury I loved. It is one thing. Only this one. Only one.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Thí sinh

I prefer typing over handwriting because typing is faster than handwriting, so it is so convenient and effective.

Giám khảo

How often do you keep diaries?

Thí sinh

I keep Diaries every day. If I write daily every day, I'm me. I can memorize all things. It helpful for me in the future.

Giám khảo

What other methods do you use to record your life?

Thí sinh

I use Instagram stories to record my life, I light my life in English and I share with my friend.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Answer wa chotto fukuzatsu de, 'write a lot' no imi ga sukoshi fumei desu. 'It makes his happy' wa grammatikaru ni machigatte imasu. Motto shizen de seikaku na hyougen o tsukatte kudasai.

Ví dụ: Yes, I write quite often, especially letters to my boyfriend. Writing letters makes him happy and helps us stay connected.

What do you like to write? Why?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Kotae ga fumei de, 'I like to like my love' wa imi ga wakarimasen. 'umm' wa yoku tsukaimasu ga, IELTS de wa yokeru hou ga ii desu. Motto meikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai.

Ví dụ: I like to write love letters to my boyfriend because chatting online is not enough. Writing helps me express my feelings more deeply.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Kotae ga fumei de, 'the thing I liked' ya 'luxury I loved' no imi ga wakarimasen. Motto meikaku ni setsumei shite, rikai shi yasui kotoba o tsukatte kudasai.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think what I write will change because my feelings for my boyfriend are constant and special to me.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: Kotae wa meikaku de, rikai shi yasui desu. Demo, 'so convenient and effective' wa chotto kantan sugiru node, motto kuwashiku setsumei shite kudasai.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is faster and more convenient, especially when I need to write quickly or edit my text.

How often do you keep diaries?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Kotae wa sukoshi fumei de, 'I'm me' no imi ga wakarimasen. 'It helpful' wa grammatikaru ni machigatte imasu. Motto seikaku na hyougen o tsukatte kudasai.

Ví dụ: I keep a diary every day. Writing daily helps me remember important events and is useful for my future.

What other methods do you use to record your life?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 'I light my life in English' wa imi ga fumei desu. Kotae wa chotto fumei de, motto meikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai.

Ví dụ: I use Instagram stories to record my life. I write captions in English and share them with my friends.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× It makes his happy.

It makes him happy.

The pronoun 'his' is a possessive adjective and cannot be used as the object of the verb 'makes'. The correct object pronoun here is 'him'. Use 'him' when the pronoun is the object of a verb.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I like to like my love for my boyfriend because umm.

I like to express my love for my boyfriend because umm.

The phrase 'I like to like my love' is incorrect and unclear. The verb 'like' should not be repeated. Instead, use 'express' to convey the intended meaning of showing or communicating love.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× No, I don't think the thing I liked would change because this is the luxury I loved.

No, I don't think the thing I like would change because this is the love I have.

The use of past tense 'liked' and 'loved' is inconsistent with the present context. Also, 'luxury' is incorrect here; likely intended word is 'love'. Use present tense 'like' and 'have' to express ongoing feelings.

Singular and plural issue

× I keep Diaries every day.

I keep a diary every day.

The noun 'diaries' is plural, but the sentence refers to a singular habit. Use singular 'diary' with the article 'a' to indicate one diary kept daily.

Sentence structure errors

× If I write daily every day, I'm me.

If I write daily every day, I can remember myself.

The phrase 'I'm me' is unclear and ungrammatical. The intended meaning seems to be about remembering or understanding oneself, so rephrasing is necessary for clarity.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It helpful for me in the future.

It is helpful for me in the future.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to link the subject and adjective. 'Helpful' is an adjective and requires a linking verb to form a correct sentence.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I light my life in English and I share with my friend.

I write about my life in English and share it with my friends.

The verb 'light' is incorrect here; likely intended verb is 'write'. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match general sharing. Additionally, 'share it' clarifies the object shared.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
LightBright; Animate; Flimsy; Nimble; Gentle
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