Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“would to write down”应为“would write down”。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并且注意时态和介词的正确使用。

Ví dụ: I write a lot depending on my mood. When I feel upset or anxious, I like to write down my feelings in a notebook. However, I rarely write when I am happy.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但句子较长且有些重复。建议使用更简洁的表达，并且注意单复数形式，如“thought”应为“thoughts”。

Ví dụ: I like to write diaries because they help me record my thoughts and emotions. Looking back at them allows me to reflect on my personal growth.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“was a people”应为“I am a person”。建议简化句子，避免口头语“uh”，并注意时态和词汇的准确使用。

Ví dụ: I believe the things I write will not change in the next three years because I enjoy recording my feelings and thoughts in my diary regularly.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不完整，最后一句话未完成。建议完整表达观点，避免重复和语法错误，如“prefer type”应为“prefer to type”。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing my thoughts on my phone because it is always with me. This way, I can write anytime and anywhere, which is more convenient than handwriting.

Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法错误和表达不清晰，如“I that depend”、“I seldom to keep dying”。建议练习基本句型，避免重复和错误的词汇使用。

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood. I write in my diary more often when I feel upset, but I rarely write when I am happy.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误，如“like to photo”应为“like to take photos”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构。

Ví dụ: I like to take photos to record my life because I enjoy the colors and images. Taking pictures with my friends helps me remember the good times.

× I would to write down my bad emotion on the memorandum.

✓ I would write down my bad emotions on the memorandum.

这里的动词短语“would to write”是不正确的，情态动词后面应直接接动词原形，去掉“to”。另外，emotion应使用复数形式emotions，因为表达多种情绪。

× Or some books a decoration with stamps.

✓ Or some books are decorated with stamps.

句子缺少谓语动词，且表达不完整。应使用被动语态“are decorated”来说明书被邮票装饰。

× If I feel upset, frustrated or anxious, I would to write down my bad emotion on the memorandum.

✓ If I feel upset, frustrated or anxious, I would write down my bad emotions on the memorandum.

emotion应使用复数形式emotions，因为表达多种情绪。

× I prefer type my feelings and thoughts on my phone because mobile phone is always by my side.

✓ I prefer typing my feelings and thoughts on my phone because my mobile phone is always by my side.

动词prefer后应接动名词形式，故type改为typing。同时，mobile phone前应加物主代词my。

× I prefer type my feelings and thoughts on my phone because mobile phone is always by my side.

✓ I prefer typing my feelings and thoughts on my phone because my mobile phone is always by my side.

缺少物主代词my，导致表达不完整。

× I think the thing I write would not change at least next three years, uh, because I was a people really like to write down my feelings and, uh, grow and thoughts in the diary.

✓ I think the things I write will not change for at least the next three years, because I am a person who really likes to write down my feelings, growth, and thoughts in the diary.

thing应为复数things，people应为person，动词时态和搭配也需调整。

× because I was a people really like to write down my feelings and, uh, grow and thoughts in the diary.

✓ because I am a person who really likes to write down my feelings, growth, and thoughts in the diary.

此处描述现在的习惯，应使用现在时态。

× So that's become one of my accustoms.

✓ So that's become one of my habits.

accustoms用法错误，习惯应使用habits。

× Just like the first question you asked about me, I that depend.

✓ Just like the first question you asked about me, I think that depends.

缺少动词think，且表达不完整。

× But when I have a happy time I maybe I just seldom to.

✓ But when I have a happy time, maybe I just seldom do.

seldom后不接to，应直接接动词原形do。

× I seldom to keep dying.

✓ I seldom keep a diary.

seldom后不接to，且dying拼写错误，应为diary。

× Especially I like to photo.

✓ Especially, I like to take photos.

photo作为名词，动词应为take photos。

× I take photos with my friends.

✓ I take photos with my friends.

此句语法正确，无需修改。