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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you write a lot?

Thí sinh

Definitely. As a university students, I have a lot of course work to write in my daily life. Mostly I write the academic reports to get a good grade in the course. Also I write a journal to process my thoughts.

Giám khảo

What do you like to write? Why?

Thí sinh

In the past, I prefer to keep a diary and write novels which is fictional, but now as a university students, I devoted most of my time on academic essays which enhance my ability in research.

Giám khảo

Do you think the things you write would change?

Thí sinh

Absolutely, when I was a child I keep the diary to write down what I have done in the days, but now I write for the aim of Academy, which varies from writing styles.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Thí sinh

It depends on the situation. If I don't have a lot of time before the deadline, typing would be a convenient and efficient way. But in the most of time, I think handwriting is more tangible way which help for to post my thoughts.

Giám khảo

How often do you keep diaries?

Thí sinh

In the past, I keep Diaries every day to write down what I have done in the day. After I entering university, I don't have so much time, so I just conclude the week and join the aims.

Giám khảo

What other methods do you use to record your life?

Thí sinh

Mostly I take a picture of my life such as what I had eat in a week and where I had go in my travel. Also I keep a diary to record what had happened in my life.

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Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答时语法错误较多,如“a university students”应为“a university student”,且表达不够简洁自然。建议注意单复数一致,简化句子结构,使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I write quite a lot because as a university student, I have to complete many academic reports to achieve good grades. Besides that, I also keep a journal to organize my thoughts.

What do you like to write? Why?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 时态和语法使用不准确,如“prefer”应为过去式“preferred”,“which is fictional”表达不自然。建议注意时态一致,使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: I used to prefer keeping a diary and writing fictional novels, but now as a university student, I devote most of my time to academic essays because they help improve my research skills.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 语法错误较多,如“keep”应为过去式“kept”,“aim of Academy”表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和时态,表达更具体。

Ví dụ: Absolutely. When I was a child, I kept a diary to record my daily activities, but now I write mainly for academic purposes, which requires different writing styles.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 表达不够自然,存在语法错误,如“in the most of time”应为“most of the time”,“help for to post”表达错误。建议使用更地道的表达和正确的语法。

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. If I have a tight deadline, I prefer typing because it's faster. However, most of the time, I find handwriting more tangible and helpful for organizing my thoughts.

How often do you keep diaries?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 语法和表达错误较多,如“keep Diaries”应为“kept a diary”,“After I entering university”应为“After I entered university”,且“join the aims”表达不清楚。建议注意时态和词汇准确性。

Ví dụ: I used to keep a diary every day to record my daily activities. But after entering university, I don't have much time, so I usually summarize my week instead.

What other methods do you use to record your life?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 时态使用不当,如“had eat”应为“have eaten”,“had go”应为“have gone”。表达不够自然,建议使用正确时态和更流畅的表达。

Ví dụ: I mostly take pictures to record my life, like what I have eaten during the week and places I have visited while traveling. I also keep a diary to note important events.

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