Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误和重复表达，句子应更简洁自然。例如“I'm very hate to like the calculation”表达不清晰，应改为“I'm not good at calculations.”同时，回答应紧扣写作主题，避免无关内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I write a lot, especially essays in my economics class at junior high school. I usually write between 2000 to 3000 words because I enjoy expressing my ideas through writing.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“I enjoy right?”应为“I enjoy writing.”建议使用连贯的句子并用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I enjoy writing essays, especially in my economics class. Writing allows me to express my ideas clearly and share them with my friends, which makes me happy.

Gợi ý: 回答不够直接，内容有些混乱。建议直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点，避免无关内容。

Ví dụ: I think what I write can change over time because my thoughts and experiences change. For example, when I make a to-do list, I try to be careful because it helps me stay organized.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不准确，建议明确表达偏好并用连接词使句子连贯。避免重复和不必要的词汇。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing when I write long texts because it is faster and less tiring. However, I like handwriting for short stories because it feels more personal.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议用简洁句子表达频率，并说明原因，避免重复。

Ví dụ: I keep a diary depending on my feelings and experiences. For example, if I have a special day or feel happy, I like to write about it to remember those moments.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议用更准确的句子表达使用社交媒体记录生活的方式，并用连接词使内容连贯。

Ví dụ: Besides writing, I use social media to record my life. For example, I chat with friends from different countries on WeChat, which allows me to share opinions and stay connected.

× I write a lot of essay and words, 2000 to 3000 words, because I like to write a lot.

✓ I write a lot of essays and words, 2000 to 3000 words, because I like to write a lot.

“essay”应使用复数形式“essays”，因为这里表示多篇文章。英语中可数名词表示多个时需用复数形式。

× I'm very hate to like the calculation, the numbers.

✓ I really hate calculations and numbers.

“very hate to like”结构不正确，应使用副词“really”修饰动词“hate”，且“calculation”应用复数“calculations”，表达对计算和数字的讨厌。

× I enjoy right?

✓ I enjoy writing.

“enjoy right?”语法错误，应为“I enjoy writing.”，动词“enjoy”后应接动名词形式。

× I often write essay for about 2000 to 3000 words because I enjoyed experiencing my ideas in writing and writing can bring happiness to me because I can share my ideas to other friend.

✓ I often write essays of about 2000 to 3000 words because I enjoy expressing my ideas in writing, and writing can bring happiness to me because I can share my ideas with other friends.

“essay”应为复数“essays”；“enjoyed”时态错误，应为现在时“enjoy”；“experiencing”用词不当，应为“expressing”；“share my ideas to other friend”应为“share my ideas with other friends”，介词和名词复数形式错误。

× I don't know because I believe what Jenny says to be present, so I didn't imagine and guess what happened in the future.

✓ I don't know because I believe what Jenny says is true, so I don't imagine or guess what will happen in the future.

“didn't imagine and guess”时态不一致，应与前句保持现在时；“to be present”表达不清，应改为“is true”；“happened”应为将来时“will happen”。

× I can share my ideas to other friend.

✓ I can share my ideas with other friends.

动词“share”后应接介词“with”，且“friend”应为复数“friends”。

× I can share my ideas to other friend.

✓ I can share my ideas with other friends.

“other friend”应为复数形式“other friends”，且介词应为“with”。

× I like to typing because I think it's very conveniently and I can't feel very tired because typing is very easy for me.

✓ I like typing because I think it's very convenient and I don't feel very tired because typing is very easy for me.

“to typing”错误，应为“typing”；“conveniently”是副词，应改为形容词“convenient”；“can't feel very tired”表达不当，应为“don't feel very tired”。

× But from the handwriting, I like to write story because it's very short.

✓ But for handwriting, I like to write stories because they are very short.

“from the handwriting”应为“for handwriting”；“write story”应为复数“write stories”；“it's”指代复数应改为“they are”。

× So I want to write Diaries to writing my feeling.

✓ So I want to write diaries to express my feelings.

“Diaries”不应大写；“to writing”结构错误，应为“to express”；“feeling”应为复数“feelings”。

× For example chatting the social media to see the different friends come from different country, like come from US, come from England and we can share our opinions.

✓ For example, chatting on social media to see different friends who come from different countries, like the US and England, and we can share our opinions.

“chatting the social media”应为“chatting on social media”；“different friends come from different country”应为“friends who come from different countries”；“come from US”前应加冠词“the US”。

× So it makes me happy like to chat in the WeChat to my friends.

✓ So it makes me happy to chat with my friends on WeChat.

“like to chat in the WeChat to my friends”表达不当，应为“to chat with my friends on WeChat”，介词和词序错误。