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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you write a lot?

Thí sinh

Yes, I write quite a lot because I like to make plans for everything it can helps me to remember everything I need to do.

Giám khảo

What do you like to write? Why?

Thí sinh

I like to write plans such as study plans and my learning objectives. It it helps me save save my save money, time and and.

Giám khảo

Do you think the things you write would change?

Thí sinh

No, I don't. I think I I will write, write the plans of our life because it helps me much. It can it helps me save time and.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Thí sinh

But I prefer writing for handwriting it because it gave gave me a a few that fly flexibility.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些语法错误和重复,建议简化句子结构,避免冗余,同时注意时态和主谓一致。

Ví dụ: Yes, I write quite a lot because I like to make plans for everything. It helps me remember all the tasks I need to do.

What do you like to write? Why?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇和不完整的句子,建议表达时注意句子完整性和逻辑性,避免重复。

Ví dụ: I like to write study plans and learning objectives because they help me save time and money by organizing my tasks efficiently.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰且有重复,建议直接回答问题并用完整句子表达理由,避免重复和语法错误。

Ví dụ: No, I don't think the things I write will change much because life plans help me save time and stay organized.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和不连贯的表达,建议简洁明了地表达偏好并说明原因。

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it gives me more flexibility and helps me remember things better.

Ngữ pháp

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yes, I write quite a lot because I like to make plans for everything it can helps me to remember everything I need to do.

Yes, I write quite a lot because I like to make plans for everything; it can help me to remember everything I need to do.

原句中“it can helps”中的“helps”动词形式错误,主语是第三人称单数“it”,应使用动词原形“help”与情态动词“can”连用。情态动词后动词用原形。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I like to write plans such as study plans and my learning objectives. It it helps me save save my save money, time and and.

I like to write plans such as study plans and my learning objectives. It helps me save my money and time.

原句中存在重复词汇“It it”,“save save my save”,“and and”,这些都是多余的重复,应删除多余部分使句子通顺。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× No, I don't. I think I I will write, write the plans of our life because it helps me much. It can it helps me save time and.

No, I don't. I think I will write the plans of our life because it helps me a lot. It can help me save time.

原句中“I I will write, write”重复,应删除重复词;“it can it helps”错误,情态动词“can”后应接动词原形“help”;“helps me much”表达不自然,改为“helps me a lot”更合适。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× But I prefer writing for handwriting it because it gave gave me a a few that fly flexibility.

But I prefer handwriting because it gives me a lot of flexibility.

原句中“gave gave me a a few that fly flexibility”存在多重错误,重复词汇多且表达不清,应改为“gives me a lot of flexibility”表示“给我很大的灵活性”,符合语法和表达习惯。

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