Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I tend to write whenever I'm making a list for or I'm making a plan" which can be simplified. Also, watch subject-verb agreement, e.g., "I tends" should be "I tend." Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: No, I don't write a lot, but I usually write when I make lists or plans. Also, I write notes during my studies to help me remember important points.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and detailed but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas and by using more precise vocabulary. For example, instead of "other stuff," you can say "other essentials." Also, try to avoid run-on sentences by breaking them into shorter, clearer sentences.

Ví dụ: When I go to the market, I like to write a grocery list and other essentials I need to buy. Moreover, during my studies, I write important notes to help me stay focused and organized.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question well but has some grammatical errors and repetition. For example, "my writing style my writing was simpler" is repetitive. Also, use correct verb agreement: "ideas tends" should be "ideas tend." Use linking words like "for instance" to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe the things I write will change over time. As I gain more experience and knowledge, my writing style and ideas tend to evolve. For instance, when I was younger, my writing was simpler, but now I try to include more complex vocabulary and deeper thoughts.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and concise. Avoid awkward phrases like "whenever I am handwriting with pen." Instead, say "when I write by hand." Also, use linking words to contrast your preferences clearly.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing because if I make a mistake, I can easily correct it. In contrast, when I write by hand with a pen, I cannot erase what I have written.

× And whenever I do my studies I tends to write.

✓ And whenever I do my studies I tend to write.

The verb 'tends' is incorrectly used with the first person singular subject 'I'. In English, the third person singular form adds 's' or 'es' to the verb, but for 'I' the base form is used without 's'. So, 'I tend' is correct, not 'I tends'.

× As I gain more experience and knowledge, my writing style and ideas tends to evolve.

✓ As I gain more experience and knowledge, my writing style and ideas tend to evolve.

The subject 'my writing style and ideas' is plural, so the verb should be in the base form without 's'. Using 'tends' is incorrect here because it is for singular third person subjects. The correct verb form is 'tend'.