Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and somewhat unclear due to grammar mistakes and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, and avoid repeating similar ideas. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I write a lot because I am a student. For example, I usually write my homework, assignments, and notes related to my topics in my notebook.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily and focus on explaining why you like to write with specific reasons.

Ví dụ: I like to write homework assignments and take notes because it helps me organize my thoughts and understand the material better.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I don't think the things I write will change much because writing is an essential part of life. Although technology is advancing and we use electronic devices, writing on paper remains important.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but is unclear due to grammar and word choice errors. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and use correct grammar and vocabulary to express your ideas.

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. When I am in class, I prefer handwriting to take notes. However, for assignments or emails, I prefer typing on the computer.

× Definitely as I am a student so I usually write various type of thing for example my homework as well as make the assignment on my notebook and also write the example that is related to my topic.

✓ Definitely, as I am a student, I usually write various types of things, for example, my homework, as well as make assignments in my notebook and also write examples that are related to my topic.

The phrase 'various type of thing' is incorrect because 'various' requires a plural noun. Therefore, 'type' should be pluralized to 'types' and 'thing' to 'things'. Also, 'make the assignment' should be pluralized to 'make assignments' to match the context. This correction ensures proper singular/plural agreement.

× Definitely as I am a student so I usually write various type of thing for example my homework as well as make the assignment on my notebook and also write the example that is related to my topic.

✓ Definitely, as I am a student, I usually write various types of things, for example, my homework, as well as make assignments in my notebook and also write examples that are related to my topic.

The phrase 'make the assignment on my notebook' is awkward. The correct preposition is 'in' for notebooks, and 'make assignments' is more natural. Also, 'write the example' should be 'write examples' to match plural usage. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Definitely as I am a student so I usually write various type of thing for example my homework as well as make the assignment on my notebook and also write the example that is related to my topic.

✓ Definitely, as I am a student, I usually write various types of things, for example, my homework, as well as make assignments in my notebook and also write examples that are related to my topic.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'notebook'. The correct preposition is 'in' because we write inside a notebook, not on it. Correct preposition usage is important for natural and accurate English.

× I like to write the homework assignment, take notes in my notebook and write down the example because it helps to organize my thought and understand the material.

✓ I like to write homework assignments, take notes in my notebook, and write down examples because they help to organize my thoughts and understand the material.

'Homework assignment' should be pluralized to 'homework assignments' to match the general activity. 'Example' should be plural 'examples' because multiple examples are implied. 'Thought' should be plural 'thoughts' to indicate multiple ideas. Also, 'it helps' should be 'they help' to agree with plural subjects.

× I like to write the homework assignment, take notes in my notebook and write down the example because it helps to organize my thought and understand the material.

✓ I like to write homework assignments, take notes in my notebook, and write down examples because they help to organize my thoughts and understand the material.

The pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to multiple activities ('homework assignments', 'notes', 'examples'). The correct pronoun is 'they' to agree with the plural antecedents. This ensures proper pronoun agreement.

× I don't think so, as the writing play part and parcel in the individual life.

✓ I don't think so, as writing plays a part and parcel in individual life.

The verb 'play' should be 'plays' to agree with the singular noun 'writing' (third person singular). Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'part and parcel'. This correction fixes subject-verb agreement and article usage.

× I don't think so, as the writing play part and parcel in the individual life.

✓ I don't think so, as writing plays a part and parcel in individual life.

The definite article 'the' before 'writing' and 'individual life' is unnecessary here. 'Writing' and 'individual life' are used in a general sense, so articles should be omitted or changed appropriately. Also, 'a' is needed before 'part and parcel'.

× If the technology is increasing then we can use the electronic gadget.

✓ If technology is increasing, then we can use electronic gadgets.

'The technology' should be 'technology' because it is uncountable and general here. 'Electronic gadget' should be plural 'electronic gadgets' to match the general meaning. Also, a comma is needed after the conditional clause for clarity.

× But on writing the paper it is very important to write rather than to be like.

✓ But when writing on paper, it is very important to write rather than to be like that.

The phrase 'on writing the paper' is awkward; 'when writing on paper' is more natural. Also, 'to be like' is incomplete and unclear; adding 'that' clarifies the meaning. Preposition and phrase usage are corrected for clarity.

× But on writing the paper it is very important to write rather than to be like.

✓ But when writing on paper, it is very important to write rather than just imitate.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'just imitate' clarifies the intended meaning. The sentence structure is improved for coherence and clarity.

× Col. it painter on the situation, whenever I am in the class and I have to write down the example or anything else then I mostly prefer to write with the write on the paper.

✓ It depends on the situation. Whenever I am in class and have to write down examples or anything else, I mostly prefer to write with a pen on paper.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect phrases like 'Col. it painter on the situation' and 'write with the write on the paper'. These are corrected to clear, grammatically correct sentences. 'Write with a pen on paper' is the natural expression.

× Col. it painter on the situation, whenever I am in the class and I have to write down the example or anything else then I mostly prefer to write with the write on the paper.

✓ It depends on the situation. Whenever I am in class and have to write down examples or anything else, I mostly prefer to write with a pen on paper.

The preposition 'in the class' is better as 'in class' for natural English. Also, 'write with the write on the paper' is incorrect; it should be 'write with a pen on paper'. Prepositions and phrases are corrected for natural usage.

× Col. it painter on the situation, whenever I am in the class and I have to write down the example or anything else then I mostly prefer to write with the write on the paper.

✓ It depends on the situation. Whenever I am in class and have to write down examples or anything else, I mostly prefer to write with a pen on paper.

The singular 'example' should be plural 'examples' to match the general context. This correction ensures proper singular/plural agreement.

× Apart from this whenever I making the assignment on the computer program or type a e-mail to someone then I prefer to typing on the computer.

✓ Apart from this, whenever I am making an assignment on the computer or typing an email to someone, I prefer typing on the computer.

The phrase 'I making' is incorrect; it should be 'I am making' to form the present continuous tense. 'Type a e-mail' should be 'typing an email' for correct article and gerund usage. 'Prefer to typing' should be 'prefer typing' because 'prefer' can be followed directly by the gerund. These corrections fix verb tense and form errors.