Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you write a lot?
Thí sinh
Yes, I write a lot because I have to write a resolution paper in order to graduate from my university. So writing a lot is quite essential for me to graduation from my school.
Giám khảo
What do you like to write? Why?
Thí sinh
I like to write English sentences in order to improve my English skills. For example, in this IELTS test I I usually write English sentences to get an acceptable score in this test.
Giám khảo
Do you think the things you write would change?
Thí sinh
Yes, as I said, I like to write down the English sentences, but my English is still improving. So if I improve my English, I can change the sentences while I write down the English.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Thí sinh
I definitely prefer typing rather than handwriting because my handwriting is very poor and it's very hard for many people to read clearly, so I usually use the typing to express my opinion.
Đánh giá
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Part 1
Do you write a lot?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤り（"to graduation"は不自然）や冗長な表現があります。より自然で簡潔な表現を心がけ、文法ミスを修正しましょう。
Ví dụ: Yes, I write a lot because I need to complete a resolution paper to graduate from my university. Therefore, writing frequently is essential for me.
What do you like to write? Why?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答は質問に答えていますが、繰り返しや冗長な表現（"I I"や"in this IELTS test"の重複）があり、内容もやや単調です。より具体的な理由や例を加え、繋ぎ言葉を使って自然な流れにしましょう。
Ví dụ: I like to write English sentences because it helps me improve my language skills. For instance, practicing writing regularly prepares me to achieve a good score in the IELTS test.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、表現が不自然で繰り返しが多いです。より明確で簡潔な表現を使い、論理的な繋ぎ言葉を活用しましょう。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe the things I write will change as my English improves. Therefore, I can revise and enhance my sentences over time.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答は明確で理由も述べられていますが、"the typing"のような不自然な表現や冗長な部分があります。より自然な表現に直し、簡潔にまとめましょう。
Ví dụ: I definitely prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is poor and difficult for others to read, so I usually type to express my opinions.
Ngữ pháp
× So writing a lot is quite essential for me to graduation from my school.
✓ So writing a lot is quite essential for me to graduate from my school.
The phrase 'to graduation' is incorrect because 'graduation' is a noun, but the verb 'graduate' should be used here to express the action. The correct form is 'to graduate from my school.'
× For example, in this IELTS test I I usually write English sentences to get an acceptable score in this test.
✓ For example, in this IELTS test I usually write English sentences to get an acceptable score.
The sentence contains a repeated word 'I I' which is a typographical error. Also, repeating 'in this test' is redundant. Removing the repetition improves clarity.
× So if I improve my English, I can change the sentences while I write down the English.
✓ So if I improve my English, I can change the sentences while I write down English.
The phrase 'write down the English' incorrectly uses the definite article 'the' before 'English' which is a language and does not require an article here.
× I usually use the typing to express my opinion.
✓ I usually use typing to express my opinion.
The phrase 'use the typing' is incorrect because 'typing' is an uncountable noun here and does not need the definite article 'the'. Also, 'use typing' is the correct expression.
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