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Mô phỏngPart12025-08-14 05:34:43

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you write a lot?

Thí sinh

Yes, I love to write umm. Usually I have umm, school homework which I wrote instead of that. I also like to write things about my daily routine so that I can organize myself for upcoming days.

Giám khảo

What do you like to write? Why?

Thí sinh

As I mentioned earlier, usually I love to write about my daily tasks and routines. So I love to write my task and routines daily because it helps me to organize and also help me to to remember my things which I have to do in upcoming weeks or days. Instead of this I also.

Giám khảo

Do you think the things you write would change?

Thí sinh

Do you think the things you write would change? Yes, according to me, writing can change a lot of things. If I wrote about yesterday, I can improve my upcoming tomorrow that I can apply my new inventions in new upcoming.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Thí sinh

According to myself, handwriting is the best option. It also help us to feel relaxed and calm. I I I I having one notebook which I used to write about my daily tasks and I also write about my upcoming tasks so that I can improve myself. So this.

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Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and focus on making your sentences clear and concise. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details, and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I write quite often. Usually, I complete my school homework by writing, and I also like to jot down my daily routine to help organize my upcoming days.

What do you like to write? Why?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Make sure to complete your answers fully and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain your reasons clearly, and try to be specific about how writing helps you.

Ví dụ: I like to write about my daily tasks and routines because it helps me stay organized and remember important things I need to do in the coming days or weeks.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Avoid repeating the question in your answer. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your thoughts logically. Also, be specific about how writing can lead to change or improvement.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe what I write can change over time. By reflecting on my past writing, I can learn from my experiences and make better plans for the future.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use clear topic sentences and supporting details with linking words to explain your preference. Also, be specific about why handwriting helps you.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it helps me feel relaxed and calm. I keep a notebook where I write about my daily and upcoming tasks, which helps me improve my organization skills.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Usually I have umm, school homework which I wrote instead of that.

Usually I have umm, school homework which I write instead of that.

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'wrote' when referring to habitual or current actions. Since the context is about usual homework, the present tense 'write' should be used to indicate ongoing or repeated actions.

Singular and plural issue

× So I love to write my task and routines daily because it helps me to organize and also help me to to remember my things which I have to do in upcoming weeks or days.

So I love to write my tasks and routines daily because it helps me to organize and also helps me to remember the things I have to do in the upcoming weeks or days.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'routines' and the context of multiple activities. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Additionally, 'to to' is a typo and should be 'to'. 'My things' is better expressed as 'the things I have to do' for clarity.

Past tense issue

× If I wrote about yesterday, I can improve my upcoming tomorrow that I can apply my new inventions in new upcoming.

If I write about yesterday, I can improve my upcoming tomorrow by applying my new ideas in the future.

The conditional sentence requires the present tense 'write' in the 'if' clause to express a real possibility. 'Inventions' is likely a misuse; 'ideas' fits better. The phrase 'new upcoming' is unclear and redundant; 'in the future' is clearer.

Modal verb usage

× I also like to write things about my daily routine so that I can organize myself for upcoming days.

I also like to write things about my daily routine so that I can organize myself for the upcoming days.

The phrase 'upcoming days' needs the definite article 'the' to specify particular days in the near future.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× According to myself, handwriting is the best option.

According to me, handwriting is the best option.

The phrase 'according to myself' is incorrect because 'myself' is a reflexive pronoun and cannot be used as the object of a preposition. The correct pronoun is 'me'.

Singular and plural issue

× It also help us to feel relaxed and calm.

It also helps us to feel relaxed and calm.

The verb 'help' must agree with the singular subject 'It', so it should be 'helps'.

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BestFinest; To the highest standard
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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