Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和冠词的使用。可以尝试用更简洁的句子表达写作的重要性和写作内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I write a lot because it is an important part of my job. I mainly write literary criticism and essays on literary theory. Reading a lot of literature also helps me improve my writing skills.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较为重复，且部分表达不够准确。建议直接回答问题，避免重复“class”和“knowledge”，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I like to write essays about literary theory and criticism because I major in literature. Writing these essays allows me to apply what I have learned in class and improve both my knowledge and writing skills.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用简单句表达观点，注意主谓一致和时态，避免重复。

Ví dụ: I don't think the topics I write about will change much in the near future. I am interested in literature and will continue to write essays on this subject because I am researching it.

Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰，但句子结构可以更自然流畅。建议合并句子，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: It depends on what I am writing. For short articles, I prefer handwriting, but for longer pieces like research articles, I usually type because it is more efficient.

× Well to be honest writing is an important part of my job so I do write a lot especially the literary criticism and the literary theory about and also I need to reading a lot of literature so which can help me to improve my writing skills?

✓ Well, to be honest, writing is an important part of my job, so I do write a lot, especially literary criticism and literary theory, and I also need to read a lot of literature, which can help me improve my writing skills.

句中“need to reading”应改为“need to read”，因为“need to”后面应接动词原形。

× Well to be honest writing is an important part of my job so I do write a lot especially the literary criticism and the literary theory about and also I need to reading a lot of literature so which can help me to improve my writing skills?

✓ Well, to be honest, writing is an important part of my job, so I do write a lot, especially literary criticism and literary theory, and I also need to read a lot of literature, which can help me improve my writing skills.

句中“the literary criticism and the literary theory about”中的“about”使用不当，应去掉或改为合适的介词。

× Well, I prefer to write the essay about the literary theory and literary criticism because that I major in literature.

✓ Well, I prefer to write essays about literary theory and literary criticism because I major in literature.

“the essay”应改为复数“essays”，因为表达的是一般偏好，且后文提到多个领域。

× So that's the knowledge I gained from the class and the literacy criticism can help me to use this knowledge I got from the class.

✓ So that's the knowledge I gained from the class, and literary criticism can help me use this knowledge I got from the class.

“the literacy criticism”应为“literary criticism”，且“help me to use”中“to”可省略。

× Well, actually I don't think the thing I write change a lot nowadays, especially today I'm quite stubborn and stick to what I learned for now.

✓ Well, actually I don't think the things I write change a lot nowadays, especially since I'm quite stubborn and stick to what I have learned for now.

“the thing”应为复数“the things”，因为指代多项写作内容。

× Well, actually I don't think the thing I write change a lot nowadays, especially today I'm quite stubborn and stick to what I learned for now.

✓ Well, actually I don't think the things I write change a lot nowadays, especially since I'm quite stubborn and stick to what I have learned for now.

“change”应与主语“things”保持一致，且“learned”应用现在完成时“have learned”表示持续影响。

× So I keep writing essay about the literature and the literature study and I don't think it will be changed in next few years because that's what I'm interested and I'm researching.

✓ So I keep writing essays about literature and literary studies, and I don't think it will change in the next few years because that's what I'm interested in and researching.

“will be changed”应改为主动语态“will change”，且“essay”应为复数“essays”，“interested”后应加介词“in”。

× So I keep writing essay about the literature and the literature study and I don't think it will be changed in next few years because that's what I'm interested and I'm researching.

✓ So I keep writing essays about literature and literary studies, and I don't think it will change in the next few years because that's what I'm interested in and researching.

“essay”应为复数“essays”，“literature study”应为复数“literary studies”。

× So I keep writing essay about the literature and the literature study and I don't think it will be changed in next few years because that's what I'm interested and I'm researching.

✓ So I keep writing essays about literature and literary studies, and I don't think it will change in the next few years because that's what I'm interested in and researching.

“interested”后应加介词“in”，表示对某事感兴趣。

× Well, that depends on the type of thing I need to write.

✓ Well, that depends on the type of thing I need to write.

此句无明显语法错误，保持原句。

× If the article is not so long then I would choose to finish the article in handwriting.

✓ If the article is not very long, then I would choose to finish the article by handwriting.

“not so long”更自然表达为“not very long”，且“in handwriting”应改为“by handwriting”表示方式。

× If the article is not so long then I would choose to finish the article in handwriting.

✓ If the article is not very long, then I would choose to finish the article by handwriting.

“in handwriting”应改为“by handwriting”，表示用手写的方式完成。

× But if the article is quite long like the research article, so I will be typing and finish it because it's more efficient.

✓ But if the article is quite long, like a research article, I will type and finish it because it's more efficient.

“But”与“so”连用重复，应去掉“so”；“will be typing”改为简单将来时“will type”更自然。