Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, clarify your past and present writing habits with proper sentence structure.

Ví dụ: Yes, I write quite often, especially to organise my daily tasks. When I was a student, I wrote even more because my teachers asked us to take notes and complete written assignments.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, be specific about what you write and why.

Ví dụ: I like writing down my daily routine, especially urgent tasks, because it helps me remember important things like shopping lists. Additionally, I keep a diary to record my feelings and experiences each day.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence. Also, avoid repeating phrases and try to be more concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, the content I write has changed over time. Previously, I mainly wrote about my studies and assignments given by teachers. Nowadays, I mostly jot down personal notes and reminders. In the future, this might change again depending on my needs.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains repetition and some unclear phrases. Try to avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing nowadays because it's more convenient and efficient. Using my smartphone or laptop allows me to quickly take notes, set reminders, and even attach photos, which handwriting doesn't offer.

× But I did rot even more when I was a student because this teacher usually asked us to take notes or even do some assessments by writing.

✓ But I did write even more when I was a student because this teacher usually asked us to take notes or even do some assessments by writing.

The word 'rot' is incorrect here; the correct past tense verb is 'wrote'. This is a past tense issue because the student used a wrong past tense verb form. The correct verb 'wrote' should be used to indicate past action.

× I love write I.

✓ I love writing.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun and verb form usage. 'I love write I' is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'I love writing' where 'writing' is the gerund form acting as the object of 'love'.

× Like for example sometimes I can't remember I what I need to buy in shopping mall if I don't put them off.

✓ For example, sometimes I can't remember what I need to buy in the shopping mall if I don't write it down.

The sentence has misplaced pronouns and awkward phrasing. 'I can't remember I what' is incorrect. Also, 'put them off' is incorrect in this context; the correct phrase is 'write it down' to mean recording reminders. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'shopping mall'.

× Also I I just write down some of my diary or the filling of that day which made me.

✓ Also, I just write down some entries in my diary or the feelings of that day which affected me.

The sentence has repeated pronoun 'I I' and incorrect word 'filling' instead of 'feelings'. The phrase 'which made me' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'which affected me' or similar. The sentence needs correction for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× The thing I have written down have already changed from day-to-day.

✓ The things I have written down have already changed from day to day.

The subject 'thing' is singular but the verb 'have' is plural, causing disagreement. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'have'. 'Day-to-day' should be 'day to day' without hyphens in this context.

× In the past what I wrote down, what I usually wrote down is about my study and assignments which are allocated from my teacher or the school.

✓ In the past, what I wrote down was usually about my study and assignments which were assigned by my teacher or the school.

The phrase 'allocated from' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'assigned by'. Also, the verb tense should be consistent past tense 'was' and 'were' to match the past context.

× But nowadays mostly I just write them for myself as some notes or other reminders.

✓ But nowadays, I mostly just write them for myself as notes or other reminders.

The adverb 'mostly' is better placed after the subject 'I' for natural word order. 'Some notes' is acceptable but 'notes' alone is more natural here.

× But in the future I'm not sure, perhaps it's going to change again.

✓ But in the future, I'm not sure; perhaps it will change again.

The phrase 'it's going to change' is acceptable but 'it will change' is more formal and appropriate here. Also, punctuation is improved for clarity.

× Nowadays I prefer typing as it's more convenient and handy to just use my smartphone or my laptop to type something down.

✓ Nowadays, I prefer typing as it's more convenient and handy to just use my smartphone or laptop to type something down.

The phrase 'my laptop' is acceptable but 'laptop' alone is sufficient and more natural. Also, a comma after 'Nowadays' improves sentence flow.

× And it's it's really convenient and efficient like to for me to reminder some notes or mark something down as well.

✓ It's really convenient and efficient for me to remind myself of some notes or mark something down as well.

The sentence has repeated 'it's it's' and awkward phrasing 'like to for me to reminder'. The verb 'reminder' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'remind'. The conjunction 'And' at the start is unnecessary and removed for better style.

× Umm it's also I can take some photos there as well.

✓ Also, I can take some photos there as well.

The phrase 'it's also I can' is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'Also, I can'. The sentence is improved by removing unnecessary filler words and correcting word order.