Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I write a lot. I used to work as a freelance screenwriter for TV series, and before that, I wrote advertising copy for an agency.

Gợi ý: 回答内容重复且表达不流畅，建议直接回答问题，简洁说明喜欢写作的类型和原因，避免无关内容。

Ví dụ: I like writing because it is my skill and helps me earn a living. I enjoy creating stories and advertising content.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够连贯，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并具体说明写作内容的变化。

Ví dụ: Yes, my writing has changed over time. Previously, I focused on romantic stories, but now I write more about individual dreams and cultural topics.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达不清晰的问题，建议简洁表达偏好并说明原因，避免重复和不必要的细节。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it is faster and allows me to communicate with friends through online apps while writing.

× before my job as freelancer was screamer writer I wrote story for those TV series

✓ before my job as a freelancer was a screenwriter, I wrote stories for those TV series

这里缺少冠词'a'，且'screamer writer'应为'screenwriter'，'story'应为复数'stories'，因为指多个故事。

× I'm a freelancer writer who write copy for advertisements for advertisement agency.

✓ I'm a freelance writer who writes copy for advertisements for an advertisement agency.

'freelancer writer'应为'freelance writer'，'write'应为第三人称单数形式'writes'，'advertisement agency'前应加不定冠词'an'。

× It's a it's a weird question every time.

✓ It's a weird question every time.

重复使用'It's a'是多余的，应删除其中一个。

× my job was a writer.

✓ my job was as a writer.

表达职业时，通常用'was a writer'，但这里加上'was as a writer'更自然。

× every time I write, it must be because I need money.

✓ every time I write, it must be because I need money.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× I want, I need to, I need to live on the earth.

✓ I want to, I need to live on the earth.

重复使用'I need to'不必要，应简化表达。

× I have my own advantage.

✓ I have my own advantage.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× My advantage is writing, so I write for money.

✓ My advantage is writing, so I write for money.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× Do you think the things you write would change?

✓ Do you think the things you write will change?

这里用将来时，'will'比'would'更合适，表示对未来的预测。

× 'cause time change a lot as before.

✓ 'cause time changes a lot compared to before.

主语'time'为第三人称单数，动词应加-s，且表达更自然应使用'compared to before'。

× I write a lot of stories between about romantic love between couples or the families.

✓ I write a lot of stories about romantic love between couples or families.

'between about'重复且错误，应去掉'between'，'the families'改为复数'families'。

× But now Chinese tend to have more personality, which means they like to see the cultures with their own job, with their own dream instead of love.

✓ But now Chinese tend to have more personality, which means they like to see cultures with their own jobs, with their own dreams instead of love.

'the cultures'应去掉定冠词，'job'和'dream'应为复数形式。

× As for me, I prefer typing because when typing online I can at the same time as my friend like use some online apps such as Shen me or the other things, Facebook, we call it in Chinese, but if we if we write just by our hand, it's really hard and tired.

✓ As for me, I prefer typing because when typing online, I can at the same time, like my friend, use some online apps such as Shenme or other things like Facebook, as we call it in Chinese. But if we write just by hand, it's really hard and tiring.

句子结构混乱，缺少逗号和连接词，'at the same time as my friend like use'应调整为'like my friend, use'，'write just by our hand'应为'write just by hand'，'tired'应为'tiring'。