Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'writing' multiple times unnecessarily.

Ví dụ: Yes, I write regularly as part of my job as a teacher. For example, I prepare lesson plans and write notes on the board during lectures.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by avoiding filler words like 'uh'. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary such as 'express' instead of 'share' when talking about emotions.

Ví dụ: I like to write articles and essays to express my thoughts and opinions on recent events. This also helps me share my emotions with friends and family.

Gợi ý: Try to organize your answer more clearly with linking words and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, be careful with grammar and sentence structure to make your ideas clearer.

Ví dụ: I don't think the type of writing I do will change because I mainly write lesson plans and notes for teaching, which I will continue to do in the future.

Gợi ý: Good answer with relevant reasons. To improve, try to use linking words like 'furthermore' or 'moreover' to connect your points and avoid informal phrases like 'So yeah'.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it allows me to easily edit and create long documents. Moreover, I can use tools like Grammarly to improve my writing, and I can conveniently store and share digital content.

× I usually do not write much but yes, we can say writing is the part of my daily routine because I'm a teacher by profession so I used to write on the board to deliver my lecture.

✓ I usually do not write much but yes, we can say writing is part of my daily routine because I'm a teacher by profession so I use to write on the board to deliver my lectures.

The phrase 'used to' is for past habits, but here the action is current, so 'use to' is correct. Also, 'lecture' should be plural 'lectures' because a teacher delivers multiple lectures. This corrects singular/plural mismatch and tense usage.

× I create my lectures, notes, lesson plans by writing.

✓ I create my lectures, notes, and lesson plans by writing.

Adding 'and' before the last item in a list is necessary for correct sentence structure and clarity in English.

× Uh, I usually like to write my thoughts in the form of articles or essay and want to share it with my friends and family members.

✓ Uh, I usually like to write my thoughts in the form of articles or essays and want to share them with my friends and family members.

The word 'essay' should be plural 'essays' to match 'articles' and 'it' should be 'them' to refer to multiple items. This corrects singular/plural agreement and pronoun reference.

× Also, I can share my emotions as well.

✓ Also, I can share my emotions.

The phrase 'also' and 'as well' are redundant when used together. Removing 'as well' improves sentence clarity and correctness.

× I generally do not think that the things I like will change because I mostly write for preparing lessons and creating lecture notes.

✓ I generally do not think that the things I like will change because I mostly write to prepare lessons and create lecture notes.

The phrase 'write for preparing' is incorrect; it should be 'write to prepare' to express purpose correctly. This corrects verb form and sentence structure.

× So that will remain the same because I'm a teacher and will remain teacher in the future as well.

✓ So that will remain the same because I'm a teacher and will remain a teacher in the future as well.

The article 'a' is missing before 'teacher'. This is an article error and affects sentence correctness.

× So yeah, this writing will continue as it is now, as I have to use it in my writing for.

✓ So yeah, this writing will continue as it is now, as I have to use it in my work.

The phrase 'use it in my writing for' is incomplete and unclear. Changing it to 'use it in my work' corrects sentence structure and clarity.

× I prefer typing instead of handwriting because the typing allows me to edit and to efficiently create long documents.

✓ I prefer typing instead of handwriting because typing allows me to edit and efficiently create long documents.

The article 'the' before 'typing' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Also, 'to efficiently create' should be 'efficiently create' for parallel structure.

× Also it can enhance my writing by using additional tools such as Grammarly available online.

✓ Also, it can enhance my writing by using additional tools such as Grammarly, which is available online.

A comma is needed after 'Also' and before 'which' to correctly connect clauses and improve sentence clarity.

× So yeah. And also by typing I can store and share the digital content very easily.

✓ So yeah, and also by typing I can store and share digital content very easily.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and should be connected to the previous sentence with a comma. Also, 'the digital content' should be 'digital content' as it is general.