Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免重复表达，例如“it can help me improve my language”和“it can relieve stress”之间缺少连接词，且句子较长，建议简化并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I write quite often because, as a student, it helps me improve my language skills and also relieves stress.

Gợi ý: 表达不够自然，‘I'm crazy about’用词稍显口语化且不够正式，且句子结构不够清晰，建议使用更正式的表达并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I really enjoy writing about my personal experiences because it helps me remember important events and serves as a record for the future.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，如“will be changed”应为“will change”，且例子表达不清晰，建议使用更准确的时态和更具体的例子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe what I write can change over time. For instance, I once wrote about a tree near my high school, but now it has been replaced by a new building.

Gợi ý: 表达不够清晰，‘it is important for me’和‘it can enhance my impression’含义模糊，建议明确说明手写的具体好处，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Personally, I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better and makes a stronger impression on me.

× Well, I'm crazy about writing my experiences.

✓ Well, I'm crazy about writing about my experiences.

这里缺少介词“about”，导致表达不完整。'crazy about'后面通常接动名词短语，表示对某事物的热爱，'writing about my experiences'更符合习惯用法。

× This is because it can remember important and significant things and it is a memory for my future.

✓ This is because it can help me remember important and significant things and it is a memory for my future.

动词'remember'需要有动作的执行者，这里应使用'help me remember'，而不是'it can remember'，因为'it'指代不明确且不能主动记忆。

× I think these things will be changed.

✓ I think these things will change.

'will be changed'是被动语态，表示别人改变这些东西，但这里应表达事物自身的变化，故用主动语态'will change'。

× For example, when I was a child I wrote a tree that painted my high school, but then now it is replaced.

✓ For example, when I was a child I wrote about a tree that was painted at my high school, but now it has been replaced.

'wrote a tree'表达不当，应为'wrote about a tree'；'that painted my high school'语法错误，应为'was painted at my high school'；'then now'时间表达冲突，应简化为'now'；'it is replaced'时态不对，改为现在完成时被动语态'had been replaced'或'has been replaced'。

× Personally, I'd opt for handwriting when I am writing.

✓ Personally, I'd opt for handwriting when I write.

此处表达习惯上用一般现在时表示习惯动作，'when I write'比'when I am writing'更自然。

× This is because it is important for me and I never forget these things and it can enhance my impression.

✓ This is because it is important to me, I never forget these things, and it can enhance my impression.

'important for me'应为'important to me'；句子中连接词使用不当，建议用逗号分隔并用'and'连接，语义更清晰。