Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific details with linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

Ví dụ: Yes, I write quite a lot. For example, I keep a daily journal where I record important events and thoughts from each day, especially in the evenings.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and grammatical accuracy. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain your reasons with specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I enjoy writing daily records because it helps me remember important moments. Moreover, I hope to share these writings with future generations so they can learn about my life.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and structured. Use linking words to compare past and present writing habits clearly, and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Ví dụ: In the past, I used to write manually with pen and paper. However, nowadays, most people, including myself, prefer typing notes on mobile phones because it is more convenient.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your preference clearly with reasons, using correct grammar and linking words to organize your ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing over handwriting because it is more convenient on mobile phones. Additionally, typing software often includes spell check, which helps me learn correct spellings.

× I am also writing my life daily.

✓ I also write about my life daily.

The original sentence uses the present continuous tense 'I am also writing' which is less appropriate here because the action is habitual. The simple present tense 'I also write' better expresses a regular activity.

× I write everything throughout the day at evening.

✓ I write everything throughout the day in the evening.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect when referring to 'evening'. The correct preposition is 'in' for parts of the day such as morning, afternoon, and evening.

× I want give it to my new generation.

✓ I want to give it to my new generation.

The verb 'want' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to give'. The omission of 'to' is a grammatical error.

× At a pastime, I write, I use more paper, pen and I write manually.

✓ In the past, I wrote, I used more paper and pen, and I wrote manually.

The phrase 'At a pastime' is incorrect; 'In the past' is the correct expression. Also, the verbs should be in the past tense to match the time reference.

× But nowadays everyone, me and everyone are using mobile phones to write.

✓ But nowadays, everyone, including me, is using mobile phones to write.

The phrase 'everyone, me and everyone' is redundant and ungrammatical. 'Including me' clarifies the subject, and 'is' agrees with the singular indefinite pronoun 'everyone'.

× I give more reference to typing as a compared to handwriting because the IT is very convenient on write a mobile phone and secondly there is a self correction software so people can learn the spellings from the mobile phone which they.

✓ I give more preference to typing compared to handwriting because IT is very convenient for writing on a mobile phone, and secondly, there is self-correction software so people can learn spellings from the mobile phone.

Several preposition errors: 'give more reference to' should be 'give more preference to'; 'convenient on write a mobile phone' should be 'convenient for writing on a mobile phone'. Also, 'self correction software' should be 'self-correction software'. The sentence was also incomplete and has been corrected for clarity.