Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中表达了观点，但语言不够自然，句子结构有些生硬，且部分表达不够准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复和冗长。

Ví dụ: No, I don't write much because I prefer capturing my life through videos or chatting with friends rather than writing it down.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达喜欢写什么及原因，注意语法和句子完整性。

Ví dụ: I like to write about my feelings because they help me understand myself better at that moment.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整，但句子较长且重复，表达不够简洁。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe what I write changes over time because at different stages of life, people focus on different experiences to record.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点和原因，但最后一句不完整且用词不当。建议注意句子完整性和用词准确，表达更自然。

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it helps me calm down and focus. For example, when I'm feeling sad, writing by hand helps me manage my emotions.

× Been moved because the move feeling is very valuable for me to consider what I.

✓ I have been moved because the moving feeling is very valuable for me to consider what I feel.

原句缺少主语和谓语，导致句子结构不完整。应补充主语“I”和谓语“have been moved”，并将“move feeling”改为“moving feeling”以表达正确的形容词形式。

× ...people want to write down different things in their different life stages to record the moments of their currently life.

✓ ...people want to write down different things in their different life stages to record the moments of their current life.

“currently”是副词，不能修饰名词“life”，应改为形容词“current”。

× I can raise my emotion down to.

✓ I can calm my emotions down.

“raise”意为“提升”，与“down”搭配不当，表达情绪降低应使用“calm down”。此外，“emotion”应使用复数形式“emotions”更合适。