Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and slight redundancy. For example, "organize my minds" should be "organize my mind" and "on the notes" could be simplified to "in notes." Also, avoid repeating words like "a lot" twice. Try to make your sentences more concise and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy writing because it helps me organize my thoughts and plans systematically. For instance, I often write my To-Do List in notes, which helps me manage my workouts effectively.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains repetition and some grammatical mistakes. For example, "overwhelmed overwhelmed" is repeated, and "put my emotions on the journals" should be "write my emotions in my journal." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I usually like to write in a journal because it helps me express my feelings clearly. For example, whenever I feel overwhelmed, I write down my emotions in my journal, which helps me feel calmer.

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. For example, "things I would write to" is confusing, and "I had wrote" should be "I have written." Try to clarify your ideas and use correct verb tenses. Also, avoid repeating words like "I I."

Ví dụ: I don't think the things I write change because I usually write about events that have already happened. However, sometimes I write predictions, but they often don't come true.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. For example, "choosen" should be "choose," and "which is very easier" should be "which is much easier." Also, avoid redundancy like "I do prefer both but..." Try to make your sentences more natural and concise.

Ví dụ: I like both typing and handwriting, but if I had to choose, I would prefer typing these days because it is faster, more convenient, and easier than writing by hand.

× Yes, I do enjoy writing a lot because it helps me to organize my minds and plans in a systematic way.

✓ Yes, I do enjoy writing a lot because it helps me to organize my mind and plans in a systematic way.

The word 'minds' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to their own single mind, not multiple minds. The correct singular form 'mind' should be used to match the singular subject.

× For example, I often write my To Do List on the notes which helps me to workout properly.

✓ For example, I often write my To Do List on notes which helps me to work out properly.

The phrase 'on the notes' is incorrect because 'notes' here is general and does not require the definite article 'the'. Also, 'workout' as a noun is incorrect in this context; the verb phrase 'work out' should be used to indicate the action.

× For example, whenever I feel overwhelmed overwhelmed, I put my emotions on the journals and feel more calm.

✓ For example, whenever I feel overwhelmed, I put my emotions in the journal and feel calmer.

The word 'journals' should be singular 'journal' because the speaker likely refers to a single journal. Also, the preposition 'on' is incorrect; 'in' is appropriate for writing inside a journal. Additionally, 'more calm' is better expressed as 'calmer'.

× I don't think that the things I would write to because I only write those things which has happened.

✓ I don't think that the things I would write would change because I only write about things which have happened.

The original sentence is unclear and missing parts. The modal verb 'would' is used incorrectly without a main verb. Also, 'has happened' should be 'have happened' to agree with the plural subject 'things'. The phrase 'write to' is incorrect; it should be 'write would change' to answer the question properly.

× But sometimes I I had wrote the predictions as well but they haven't.

✓ But sometimes I have written predictions as well, but they haven't come true.

The phrase 'had wrote' is incorrect; the past perfect form should be 'had written' or present perfect 'have written'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'come true' clarifies the meaning. The repetition of 'I' is a typo and should be removed.

× I do prefer both but if I had to choosen one then I would prefer for typing these days because writing is a bit boring and typing can be so fast and convenient which is very easier.

✓ I do prefer both, but if I had to choose one, then I would prefer typing these days because writing is a bit boring and typing can be so fast and convenient, which is much easier.

The word 'choosen' is incorrect; the correct past tense is 'choose'. The phrase 'prefer for typing' should be 'prefer typing'. Also, 'very easier' is incorrect; 'much easier' is the correct comparative form. Commas are added for clarity.