Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you write a lot?
Thí sinh
Yes I do, because I always I have the hobby of yes of course I I develop a hobby of writing Diaries when I was young, so I tend to write a diary every day. So it was quite usual for me to use pen or write something by myself.
Giám khảo
What do you like to write? Why?
Thí sinh
I think I prefer to write something about my experience or emotions because I think it was a good way to writing down your feelings sincerely and honestly, which can help you to dig, dig deeper inside of you. And what's more, it actually helps to learn about your.
Giám khảo
Do you think the things you write would change?
Thí sinh
Yes, because I'm growing more mature and I think my the the the the writing style I have and also the different opinions that I have also developed through the time. For example, in past I maybe just keep complaining about the world, but nowadays I tend to.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Thí sinh
I think I prefer writing by hand because first, I think writing by yourself or by hand is actually a essential ability that you could cannot lost it. And also I think handwriting often help me to organize my thoughts properly and help me to just calm down and sitting there.
Đánh giá
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Part 1
Do you write a lot?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答时语言不够流畅，有重复和语法错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意时态一致性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I write a lot because I developed a hobby of writing diaries when I was young. I tend to write in my diary every day, so writing by hand has become a usual habit for me.
What do you like to write? Why?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，建议完整表达观点，避免语法错误，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer to write about my experiences and emotions because it allows me to express my feelings sincerely. Moreover, writing helps me understand myself better by reflecting on my thoughts.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且有重复，建议避免重复词汇，完整表达观点，并举具体例子支持观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, my writing has changed as I have matured. For example, in the past, I often complained about the world, but now I try to focus on positive aspects and solutions.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够自然，建议简化句子结构，注意语法，使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it is an essential skill that shouldn't be lost. Also, writing by hand helps me organize my thoughts and calm down while I write.
Ngữ pháp
× I develop a hobby of writing Diaries when I was young
✓ I developed a hobby of writing diaries when I was young
这里的动词时态应与时间状语“when I was young”一致，使用过去式developed。同时，diaries不需要大写，且应为复数形式。
× it was a good way to writing down your feelings sincerely and honestly
✓ it was a good way to write down your feelings sincerely and honestly
动词不定式to后面应接动词原形，不能用动名词writing。
× which can help you to dig, dig deeper inside of you
✓ which can help you to dig deeper inside yourself
短语中应使用反身代词yourself，且重复的dig应去掉。
× it actually helps to learn about your
✓ it actually helps you to learn about yourself
动词help后面应接宾语you，再接不定式learn，且应使用反身代词yourself。
× in past I maybe just keep complaining about the world
✓ in the past I maybe just kept complaining about the world
时间状语应为in the past，动词keep应使用过去式kept以符合过去时间。
× writing by yourself or by hand is actually a essential ability that you could cannot lost it
✓ writing by yourself or by hand is actually an essential ability that you cannot lose
a应改为an，因为essential以元音音素开头；could cannot用法错误，应去掉could；动词lost是过去式，需用原形lose。
× handwriting often help me to organize my thoughts properly and help me to just calm down and sitting there
✓ handwriting often helps me to organize my thoughts properly and helps me to just calm down and sit there
主语handwriting为第三人称单数，动词help应加-s；calm down后面应接动词原形sit，而非现在分词sitting。
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