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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you write a lot?

Thí sinh

Yes I do. I write essays for school assignments and keep a journal to record daily thoughts. It become a habit to express myself through writing.

Giám khảo

What do you like to write? Why?

Thí sinh

I love writing short stories, they let me create imaginary words and characters, like escaping reality for a while and sharing them makes me feel connected to others.

Giám khảo

Do you think the things you write would change?

Thí sinh

Definitely. Right now I write mostly fiction, but as I gain life experience I'll probably start writing more about real life issues or personal growth. Our interests shifts or writing will do.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Thí sinh

I prefer typing, it's quicker and easier to revise, but sometimes when I want to slow down and be more creative, I'll write by hand. Both have their charm.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 7.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 7.0Phát âm: 7.0Ngữ pháp: 6.5Từ vựng: 7.0

Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容相关,但存在语法错误("It become"应为"It has become"),且句子稍显冗长。建议注意时态和语法的准确性,同时保持句子简洁。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I often write essays for school assignments and keep a journal to record my daily thoughts. It has become a habit that helps me express myself clearly.

What do you like to write? Why?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富,但句子结构较复杂且缺少适当的连接词,导致表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词分隔句子,使表达更清晰自然。

Ví dụ: I love writing short stories because they allow me to create imaginary worlds and characters. This helps me escape reality for a while, and sharing these stories makes me feel connected to others.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误("Our interests shifts"应为"Our interests shift"),且最后一句表达不够清晰。建议注意主谓一致,并用更明确的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Definitely. Right now, I mostly write fiction, but as I gain more life experience, I will probably start writing about real-life issues or personal growth. Our interests and writing styles tend to change over time.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答自然且内容完整,但句子连接处可以使用更正式的连接词以增强连贯性。建议适当使用连接词如"because"或"however"。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it's quicker and easier to revise. However, when I want to slow down and be more creative, I write by hand. Both methods have their own charm.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× It become a habit to express myself through writing.

It becomes a habit to express myself through writing.

这里的主语是单数的"It",谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"becomes",而不是原形"become"。

Singular and plural issue

× I love writing short stories, they let me create imaginary words and characters, like escaping reality for a while and sharing them makes me feel connected to others.

I love writing short stories; they let me create imaginary worlds and characters, like escaping reality for a while, and sharing them makes me feel connected to others.

原句中"imaginary words"应为"imaginary worlds",因为这里指的是虚构的世界,而不是单词。

Singular and plural issue

× Our interests shifts or writing will do.

Our interests shift or writing will do.

主语"interests"是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式"shift",而不是单数"shifts"。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ShortConcise; Brief; Scarce; Briefly
SlowUnhurried; Long-drawn-out; Obtuse; Reluctant; Sluggish
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