Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you write a lot?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do. I write a lot like my writing. My homework is about literature, my notes about things I have to buy, or maybe some things about informations about someone or some places.
Giám khảo
What do you like to write? Why?
Thí sinh
I like to write poem, I like to like copycat the songs lyrics, I like to write about what thing I need to buy or maybe just informations about person and sometimes Diaries.
Giám khảo
Do you think the things you write would change?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it would change but is it is moderately it means while writing some of the things that I have mentioned, I would write more about my schedule and like my for example dates or birthday or any occasions.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Thí sinh
I think it depends, like if they're an important things I would literally writing into a note or maybe in some of the books that I literally bring everywhere with myself. But in some cases like homework online I would like to typing.
Do you write a lot?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời cung cấp các chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I write quite a lot. For example, I often write my literature homework, make shopping lists, and jot down information about people or places I plan to visit.
What do you like to write? Why?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như "copycat". Hãy sắp xếp câu trả lời theo cấu trúc rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cung cấp lý do cho sở thích của bạn.
Ví dụ: I enjoy writing poems and sometimes copying song lyrics because they inspire me. I also like to write shopping lists and keep diaries to record my daily thoughts.
Do you think the things you write would change?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý tưởng.
Ví dụ: Yes, I think the things I write will change over time. For example, I might write more about my schedule, important dates, birthdays, and special occasions in the future.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như "literally". Hãy trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp lý do cho sự lựa chọn của bạn.
Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. For important notes, I prefer handwriting in my notebook that I carry everywhere. However, for online homework, I usually prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient.
× My homework is about literature, my notes about things I have to buy, or maybe some things about informations about someone or some places.
✓ My homework is about literature, my notes about things I have to buy, or maybe some information about someone or some places.
The word 'informations' is incorrect because 'information' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Use 'information' instead of 'informations'. This is a common singular and plural issue.
× I like to write poem, I like to like copycat the songs lyrics, I like to write about what thing I need to buy or maybe just informations about person and sometimes Diaries.
✓ I like to write poems, I like to copy the song lyrics, I like to write about what things I need to buy or maybe just information about a person and sometimes diaries.
Several singular and plural issues here: 'poem' should be plural 'poems' to match the context; 'songs lyrics' should be 'song lyrics' (lyrics is plural, 'song' is singular as adjective); 'what thing' should be 'what things' to indicate plural; 'informations' should be 'information' (uncountable); 'person' should be preceded by 'a' to be 'a person'; 'Diaries' should be lowercase 'diaries' unless it is a title. These corrections address singular/plural and article usage.
× Yes, I think it would change but is it is moderately it means while writing some of the things that I have mentioned, I would write more about my schedule and like my for example dates or birthday or any occasions.
✓ Yes, I think it would change, but moderately. It means while writing some of the things that I have mentioned, I would write more about my schedule, for example, dates, birthdays, or any occasions.
The original sentence is confusing and has sentence structure errors. 'but is it is moderately' is incorrect and unclear. It should be simplified to 'but moderately.' Also, 'like my for example dates or birthday or any occasions' is awkward; it should be 'for example, dates, birthdays, or any occasions.' Proper punctuation and clearer structure improve understanding.
× I think it depends, like if they're an important things I would literally writing into a note or maybe in some of the books that I literally bring everywhere with myself.
✓ I think it depends. Like if there are important things, I would literally write them into a note or maybe in some of the books that I literally bring everywhere with me.
'they're an important things' is incorrect; 'they're' is a contraction of 'they are' but 'things' is plural, so 'there are' is correct. Also, 'writing' should be 'write' to match the modal verb 'would.' 'with myself' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'with me.' These are pronoun and verb form errors.
× But in some cases like homework online I would like to typing.
✓ But in some cases like online homework, I would like to type.
The phrase 'would like to typing' is incorrect because after 'would like to' the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. So 'typing' should be 'type.' This is a modal verb usage error.