Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且内容重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: No, I don't write a lot because writing requires many skills that I am still developing. Therefore, I usually avoid writing lengthy articles or reports.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如动词时态和单复数形式，且句子较长。建议注意语法准确性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I enjoy writing reports because they help me organize information clearly. For example, I have written reports on human resource management and marketing at school, which also showcase my research skills.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和单复数形式，并明确表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe my writing will change as I grow older. This shows that my skills have improved and that I have become more mature.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，表达稍显冗长。建议简洁表达，避免重复，并注意名词单复数形式。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing because most people use laptops or computers nowadays, making it more convenient than handwriting. Also, I can easily share the materials I have read with others.

× I think writing things need a lot of skills and the capability to write well.

✓ I think writing things needs a lot of skills and the capability to write well.

主语是单数形式的"writing things"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"needs"。动词与主语在人称和数上要一致。

× I think I'd like, I'd currently like the ability to write well.

✓ I think I'd like to have the ability to write well currently.

"I'd like"后面应接动词不定式"to have"，表示愿望。原句缺少不定式，导致表达不完整。

× So I don't like to write a lot of things like just like article reports, just like this stuff.

✓ So I don't like to write a lot of things like articles, reports, just like this stuff.

"article reports"应分开为复数形式"articles, reports"，表示多种类型的文章和报告。

× I enjoy writing reports because I think writing reports is a good way to help me to organize my information clearly and also writing reports can shows the people my skills and capability of doing research.

✓ I enjoy writing reports because I think writing reports is a good way to help me organize my information clearly and also writing reports can show people my skills and capability of doing research.

动词"help"后面接动词原形"organize"，而非不定式"to organize"。此外，"can shows"应为"can show"，情态动词后动词用原形。

× For example, I have wrote a lot of reports such as human resource management and marketing at school.

✓ For example, I have written a lot of reports such as human resource management and marketing at school.

现在完成时态中，动词应使用过去分词形式，"wrote"是一般过去时，正确形式是"written"。

× Yes, I think the things I write will be changed because I think the changing rights can shows the people I grew up, which can demonstrate that my skills and capability have been improved.

✓ Yes, I think the things I write will change because I think the changing rights can show people I have grown up, which can demonstrate that my skills and capability have improved.

"will be changed"被动语态不合适，应该用主动语态"will change"。"can shows"应为"can show"。"I grew up"应使用现在完成时"I have grown up"。"have been improved"应为主动语态"have improved"。

× Also I think it can shows other people I'm not a naive children.

✓ Also I think it can show other people I'm not a naive child.

"children"是复数，前面用的是单数不定冠词"a"，应改为单数"child"。

× I prefer typing when I am writing because nowadays there are more and more people have their own laptops and computers to do some researches or to write some things on the keyboards, so it's more convenient than the handwritings.

✓ I prefer typing when I am writing because nowadays more and more people have their own laptops and computers to do some research or to write some things on the keyboard, so it's more convenient than handwriting.

"research"是不可数名词，不用复数形式"researches"。"keyboards"和"handwritings"在此处应使用单数形式。

× Also I can share my my read literature to other people conveniently.

✓ Also I can share the literature I have read with other people conveniently.

"my read literature"表达不正确，应改为"the literature I have read"。此外，"share"后应加介词"with"表示分享给别人。