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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you write a lot?

Thí sinh

Yes, I write a lot because I like writing novels. I also like to write in my journal to think about my day. Writing helps me keep my sources organized.

Giám khảo

What do you like to write? Why?

Thí sinh

I like writing novels because it let me use my imagination. Creating characters and different words is found and it helps me relax.

Giám khảo

Do you think the things you write would change?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think my writing will change as I get older. My experiences and views will change and that will affect what I write about. Also, new technology might change how I write.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Thí sinh

I like handwriting because it makes me feel more connected to my thoughts. I also find it helps me remember things better. Writing with a pen or pencil is a nice experience for me.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容丰富,但部分表达不够准确,如“keep my sources organized”用词不当,建议使用更贴切的表达。回答中缺少连接词,建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I write a lot because I enjoy creating novels. Additionally, I often write in my journal to reflect on my day, which helps me organize my thoughts clearly.

What do you like to write? Why?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“let me”应为“lets me”,且“is found”用词不当。建议注意时态和词汇的准确使用,同时增加连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I like writing novels because it lets me use my imagination. Moreover, creating characters and unique settings is fun, and it helps me relax after a busy day.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,内容具体,但缺少连接词使句子衔接更自然。建议使用连接词如“because”、“therefore”等增强逻辑性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think my writing will change as I get older because my experiences and views will evolve. Therefore, this will affect the topics I write about. Also, new technology might change the way I write in the future.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答自然且内容具体,但可以通过增加连接词使表达更连贯。建议适当使用连接词如“because”、“also”等。

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it makes me feel more connected to my thoughts. Also, I find that it helps me remember things better. Writing with a pen or pencil is a pleasant experience for me.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the present participle form

× I like writing novels because it let me use my imagination.

I like writing novels because it lets me use my imagination.

这里的主语是第三人称单数"it",谓语动词"let"应使用第三人称单数形式"lets",以保持主谓一致。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Creating characters and different words is found and it helps me relax.

Creating characters and different worlds is fun and it helps me relax.

原句中"found"应为"fun",表示"有趣的","words"应为"worlds",表示"世界",这是词汇使用错误,需改正以表达正确意思。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
NiceEnjoyable; Pleasant; Polite; Subtle; Fine
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