Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然，存在语法错误和用词不当，如“real mental”应为“real feelings”，“dairy”应为“diary”。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like to write to express my true feelings. I often keep a diary and sometimes write blogs online.

Gợi ý: 回答中断且不完整，缺少连贯性。建议使用连接词如“because”或“so”来组织句子，并补充完整信息。

Ví dụ: I like to write in my diary almost every day because it helps me express my true feelings and record my experiences. I also share my ideas with others through my blog.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并补充完整句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, my writing changes because my thoughts change based on my experiences.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“type in”应为“type”。建议使用更准确的表达，并补充完整理由。

Ví dụ: Nowadays, I prefer typing because it allows me to save my work on electronic devices and review it easily.

× Yes, I would like to use some words to express my real mental and I often write some dairy in my daily life and some blog on the Internet even I would like to.

✓ Yes, I would like to use some words to express my real feelings and I often write some diary in my daily life and some blogs on the Internet even if I would like to.

这里“mental”用词不当，应为“feelings”表示感受；“dairy”拼写错误，应为“diary”；“blog”应使用复数形式“blogs”，因为表示多个博客；“even I would like to”结构不完整，改为“even if I would like to”更通顺。

× I write my diary almost every day, I can express my true feelings in it and, you know, record my thoughts and experience and I often share my ideas with others through the blog in the.

✓ I write in my diary almost every day; I can express my true feelings in it and, you know, record my thoughts and experiences, and I often share my ideas with others through blogs on the Internet.

“experience”应为复数“experiences”，表示多次经历；“the blog in the”结构不完整，应改为“blogs on the Internet”；“diary”前应加介词“in”。

× Yes, they will change because the things which I would like to write reflect some thoughts in my mind and this thought always change according to some experience which I.

✓ Yes, they will change because the things which I would like to write reflect some thoughts in my mind and these thoughts always change according to some experiences which I have.

“this thought”应为复数“these thoughts”与前文复数保持一致；“change”应加-s变为“change s”，与主语一致；“experience”应为复数“experiences”；句尾不完整，补充“have”。

× Nowadays I would like to type in when I am writing, cause through this way I can preserve something I have written in some electronic device and I can often check.

✓ Nowadays I prefer to type when I am writing, because this way I can preserve what I have written on some electronic device and I can often check it.

“would like to type in”表达不自然，改为“prefer to type”；“cause”应为正式连词“because”；“something I have written”改为“what I have written”更准确；“in some electronic device”应为“on some electronic device”；句尾缺少宾语“it”。