Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have been keeping a diary since I was 18. I usually write about my daily activities, like what I eat and my plans for the day. Writing helps me feel that my life is more meaningful.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，句子结构更清晰，同时避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: I enjoy writing about my daily life, such as the food I eat and my personal experiences. When I look back at my diaries in the future, I will feel happy and find them meaningful.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不准确，逻辑不够清晰。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

Ví dụ: Honestly, I don't think what I write will change because I record my daily moments. These memories are meaningful to me, so I don't want to change them just because others might think they are unsuitable.

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然，但有语法错误和表达不够简洁。建议注意形容词和副词的正确使用，简化句子结构，使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because, although typing is fast and convenient, writing by hand helps me focus better. Also, I like decorating my notebook with stickers to make it look more attractive.

× Yes, I usually write a diary since I was 18 years old that I record my everyday life, what I eat, what I'm going to do and so on.

✓ Yes, I have usually written a diary since I was 18 years old in which I record my everyday life, what I eat, what I'm going to do and so on.

句子中使用了“since I was 18 years old”，表示从过去某时开始持续到现在，应该用现在完成时态，而不是一般现在时。建议将“usually write”改为“have usually written”。

× Yes, I usually write a diary since I was 18 years old that I record my everyday life, what I eat, what I'm going to do and so on.

✓ Yes, I have usually written a diary since I was 18 years old in which I record my everyday life, what I eat, what I'm going to do and so on.

英语中“diary”前通常用不定冠词“a”，但后面用“that”引导定语从句不太合适，改用“in which”更准确。

× And writing diary can make my life more meaningful.

✓ And writing a diary can make my life more meaningful.

“writing diary”缺少冠词，应该是“writing a diary”。

× I like to write about my daily life, for example, like what foods I eat, what should I do today and my personal experience, because when I grow up I turn back to see the Diaries, I will feel very happiness and meaningful.

✓ I like to write about my daily life, for example, what foods I eat, what I should do today and my personal experiences, because when I grow up and look back at the diaries, I will feel very happy and that is meaningful.

“turn back to see”用法不当，应该用“look back at”；“feel very happiness”中“happiness”是名词，应该用形容词“happy”；“meaningful”用作形容词，需加“that is”使句子完整。

× what foods I eat

✓ what food I eat

“food”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“foods”，应改为“food”。

× To be honest, my answer is no, because I write, the content is about myself and it was record my little moments every day.

✓ To be honest, my answer is no, because I write, the content is about myself and it records my little moments every day.

“it was record”语法错误，应为“it records”，保持时态一致。

× I don't want to change because somebody say this is not unsuitable to me.

✓ I don't want to change because somebody says this is not suitable for me.

“say”应为第三人称单数“says”；“not unsuitable”表达双重否定，改为“not suitable”；“to me”应改为“for me”。

× somebody say this is not unsuitable to me.

✓ somebody says this is not suitable for me.

主语“somebody”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“says”。

× typing is very convenient and quickly.

✓ typing is very convenient and quick.

“quickly”是副词，修饰动词；此处应使用形容词“quick”修饰名词“typing”。

× But handwriting can help me focus on the content I need to write and I can put some stickers on it to make the notebook more adorable and beautiful.

✓ Handwriting can help me focus on the content I need to write, and I can put some stickers on it to make the notebook more adorable and beautiful.

句首不宜用“but”连接，改为直接句首；两个并列句之间应加逗号。