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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you write a lot?

Thí sinh

Yes I do. Writing gives me the energy and focus I need to stay productive. It lifts my spirits and puts me in a green mood, helping me feel more motivated and positive afterwards.

Giám khảo

What do you like to write? Why?

Thí sinh

I write to write down my daily life and my feelings. Whenever I do that, it fills me with excitement and positivity. It drives me to tackle tasks better and makes everything more enjoyable. I always feel more capable and ready to face anything.

Giám khảo

Do you think the things you write would change?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think the things I write would change because everything is changing every moment.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Thí sinh

To be honest, I don't have strong feelings about typing or handwriting. I'm fine with using them, but they're not my first choice. It depends on the situation, so I go with whatever works best.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 7.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 7.0Phát âm: 7.0Ngữ pháp: 7.0Từ vựng: 7.0

Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较自然且内容积极,但“puts me in a green mood”表达不够地道,且缺少连接词使句子间衔接稍显生硬。建议使用更常见的表达方式,并适当使用连接词使回答更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Writing helps me stay focused and productive because it lifts my spirits. Moreover, it makes me feel motivated and positive afterwards.

What do you like to write? Why?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富且结构清晰,但缺少连接词使句子间衔接不够流畅。建议使用连接词如“because”、“so”来增强逻辑性。

Ví dụ: I like to write about my daily life and feelings because it fills me with excitement and positivity. As a result, I feel more capable and ready to face any challenges.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,但可以进一步丰富内容,增加具体原因或例子,并使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe what I write will change over time because my thoughts and experiences evolve constantly.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但部分句子较为重复且缺少具体细节。建议减少重复,增加具体情境说明,并使用连接词提升连贯性。

Ví dụ: I don't have a strong preference between typing and handwriting because it depends on the situation. For example, I type when I need to write quickly, but I handwrite when I want to focus more.

Ngữ pháp

Modal verb usage

× Do you think the things you write would change?

Do you think the things you write will change?

这里使用“would”不符合语境,因为是在询问对未来的看法,应该用表示将来可能性的“will”。“Would”通常用于假设或条件句。建议用“will”表达未来的可能性。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BestFinest; To the highest standard
BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
FineExcellent; Worthy; Impressive; Elegant; Delicate
ReadyCompleted; Willing; About to; Available; Prompt
StrongPowerful; Forceful; Secure; Durable; Forceful
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