Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些断断续续，句子不够连贯，且有些语法错误。建议你在回答时使用完整句子，避免句子碎片化，同时可以适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Actually, I don't write a lot nowadays because I prefer to use my cellphone to take notes. This way, it's more convenient for me to access them anytime.

Gợi ý: 你的回答内容较好，但可以增加一些细节描述，使回答更具体丰富。同时，注意句子结构的多样性。

Ví dụ: I usually like to write in my diary about my daily experiences and emotions because it helps me clear my mind and calm myself after a busy day.

Gợi ý: 你的回答不完整且句子断断续续，缺乏连贯性。建议你完整表达观点，并使用连接词使句子流畅，同时补充具体内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think the things I write have changed over time. In the past, I used to write about all kinds of small daily events, but now I prefer to focus on my thoughts and feelings.

Gợi ý: 你的回答不完整且句子不连贯，缺少具体细节。建议你用完整句子表达观点，并补充原因和细节，使回答更丰富。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I prefer typing because it is more convenient to type on my phone. I can write down anything quickly, even when I am busy or on the go.

× Actually, I don't write a lot. Nowadays.

✓ Actually, I don't write a lot nowadays.

“Nowadays”作为时间状语，应放在句中而不是单独成句，原句断句不完整，属于句子结构错误。

× And in this way, it's convenient for me to. Access them.

✓ And in this way, it's convenient for me to access them.

“to”后面应直接跟动词原形，不能断开，断句导致句子不完整，属于句子结构错误。

× I usually like to write my own diaries and my current emotions that day.

✓ I usually like to write my own diary and my current emotions of that day.

“diaries”复数不太合适，通常用“diary”表示日记；“emotions that day”表达不自然，应改为“emotions of that day”，原句结构不够准确。

× Yes, I think the things I write will change. Because in the past, I often wrote. All kinds of details and small events in my daily life.

✓ Yes, I think the things I write will change because in the past, I often wrote all kinds of details and small events in my daily life.

“Because”引导的原因状语从句不应单独成句，断句导致句子不完整，属于句子结构错误。

× But now I prefer to. Write down my.

✓ But now I prefer to write down my thoughts.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，导致表达不清楚，属于句子结构错误。

× Because. Typing on the phone is more convenient.

✓ Because typing on the phone is more convenient.

“Because”后不应断句，断句导致句子不完整，属于句子结构错误。

× And I can. Write down anything.

✓ And I can write down anything.

“can”后应直接跟动词原形，断句导致句子不完整，属于句子结构错误。

× At the end time, because I always keep my.

✓ At the end of the day, because I always keep my notes.

“At the end time”表达不自然，应为“At the end of the day”；句子不完整，缺少宾语，属于句子结构错误。