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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you write a lot?

Thí sinh

No, I rarely write things like essay or fiction or articles.

Giám khảo

What do you like to write? Why?

Thí sinh

If I have to say that is my diary, I like to write my feelings in it and I want like to decorate it with stickers or some beautiful color pen.

Giám khảo

Do you think the things you write would change?

Thí sinh

Well, if it's a prediction, I think it will change. But things already happened that I wrote it. I don't think it has the possibility to change.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Thí sinh

I prefer handwriting because I like the texture of the pen on the paper and I just can't control the type of word that I can write. I can't decide which way to go, so I like it.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为简短且表达不够自然,建议使用更自然的表达方式,并且避免列举过多同类词汇。可以直接说明写作频率,并简要说明原因。

Ví dụ: No, I don't write very often because I usually prefer speaking or reading to writing.

What do you like to write? Why?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够流畅,建议注意句子结构,避免重复和语法错误,同时可以增加细节使回答更具体。

Ví dụ: I like to write in my diary because it helps me express my feelings, and I enjoy decorating the pages with colorful pens and stickers to make it more personal.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答思路清晰,但表达略显生硬,建议使用更自然的连接词和句式,使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I believe that predictions I write might change over time, but facts or events I've already recorded won't change because they have already happened.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清晰,逻辑不够连贯,建议明确表达偏好原因,并使用连贯的句子结构。

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because I enjoy the feel of the pen on paper, and it helps me think more clearly compared to typing.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× No, I rarely write things like essay or fiction or articles.

No, I rarely write things like essays, fiction, or articles.

这里的“essay”应该用复数形式“essays”,因为前面用了“things like”,表示列举多种类型的写作,应该保持一致的复数形式。

Modal verb usage

× If I have to say that is my diary, I like to write my feelings in it and I want like to decorate it with stickers or some beautiful color pen.

If I have to say, that is my diary. I like to write my feelings in it and I want to decorate it with stickers or some beautiful colored pens.

“I want like to decorate”中“want like”用法错误,正确应为“want to”。另外,“some beautiful color pen”应改为“some beautiful colored pens”,因为“pen”应为复数且形容词应为过去分词形式修饰名词。

Past tense issue

× But things already happened that I wrote it.

But things that already happened, I wrote them.

“I wrote it”中的“it”指代不明确,且句子结构不自然,改为“I wrote them”更符合语法,且“things”是复数,代词也应为复数形式。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I just can't control the type of word that I can write.

I just can't control the type of words that I can write.

“word”应为复数“words”,因为“type of words”表示一类词语,且与上下文一致。

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