Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I am often writing" and "related to my works". Also, correct article usage is important, for example, "an email" instead of "a e-mail". Try to use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I write quite often, mainly emails and messages to my colleagues for work-related matters.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct grammar, and avoid repeating the same information. Also, explain why you like to write those things to enrich your answer.

Ví dụ: I like writing text messages and emails to my colleagues and family because it helps me stay connected and share important information quickly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat vague and repetitive. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your thoughts. Also, provide specific reasons or examples about how writing might change in the future.

Ví dụ: I believe writing will change in the future because technology is evolving rapidly, and people will use new methods to communicate, like voice messages or instant apps.

Gợi ý: Your answer has unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your preference clearly and explain the reasons with correct sentence structure. Avoid confusing expressions like "working at the prom" and "prefer to the night."

Ví dụ: I prefer both typing and handwriting depending on the situation. At home, I usually handwrite notes, but when I'm outside, I prefer typing on my phone or laptop for convenience.

× I am often writing a e-mail or some messages to my colleagues related to my works.

✓ I often write e-mails or some messages to my colleagues related to my work.

The present continuous tense 'am often writing' is incorrectly used here for habitual action; the simple present 'often write' is appropriate. Also, 'works' should be singular 'work' when referring to tasks or job-related activities.

× I'm writing a some text message and some e-mail and sometime I'm writing a mail, writing some message through the social media, so some sending to my colleagues and my family.

✓ I write some text messages and some e-mails, and sometimes I write mail, sending some messages through social media to my colleagues and my family.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before plural or uncountable nouns like 'some text message' and 'some e-mail'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× So it is good for steak with the.

✓ So it is good for staying in touch with them.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The intended meaning seems to be about maintaining communication, so 'staying in touch with them' is a suitable correction.

× So I think in the future, future would be changed or something.

✓ So I think in the future, things will change or something.

The phrase 'future would be changed' is incorrect; the future simple tense 'will change' is appropriate to express a prediction.

× It is a technology time.

✓ It is the age of technology.

The phrase 'technology time' is unnatural; 'the age of technology' is a correct and natural expression.

× So there are everyday, there are a coming everyday changing.

✓ So every day, there are changes coming every day.

The phrase 'there are everyday' is incorrect; 'every day' as two words is an adverb meaning 'each day'. Also, 'there are a coming everyday changing' is ungrammatical and is corrected to 'there are changes coming every day'.

× So people are looking at how they can send a message.

✓ So people are looking at how they can send messages.

The singular 'a message' is less natural here; plural 'messages' fits better when referring to general communication.

× When I'm working at the prom, at the home, so I'm prepared to the handwriting.

✓ When I'm working at the office or at home, I prefer handwriting.

'At the prom' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'at the office'. 'At the home' should be 'at home'. 'Prepared to the handwriting' is incorrect; 'prefer handwriting' is correct.

× So when I'm working from the outside, from the home, so I prefer to the night.

✓ So when I'm working outside, away from home, I prefer to type.

'From the outside, from the home' is awkward; 'working outside, away from home' is clearer. 'I prefer to the night' is incorrect; likely intended 'I prefer to type' or 'I prefer typing'.