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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you write a lot?

Thí sinh

Well, I write a lot, especially when it comes to commenting on social media. Whenever I come across content about food, fashion, or travel, I usually share my opinions and enjoy interacting with residents.

Giám khảo

What do you like to write? Why?

Thí sinh

I like writing messages and comments on social media because it's fun to share my thoughts and interact with others. Sometimes a simple post can spark interesting conversations.

Giám khảo

Do you think the things you write would change?

Thí sinh

Absolutely. My writing changes all the time. Sometimes I even surprise with myself what I come up with. Who knows, I'll write next.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Thí sinh

Personally, I prefer typing when I write. It's faster and more efficient, especially when I have a lot to say. Moreover, I can edit things easily without making a mess.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 7.0Phát âm: 6.5Ngữ pháp: 6.5Từ vựng: 6.5

Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较自然且内容相关,但“residents”用词不当,应为“readers”或“users”,且回答略显冗长,建议用更准确的词汇并简洁表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I write quite often, mainly by commenting on social media posts about food, fashion, or travel. I enjoy sharing my opinions and engaging with other users.

What do you like to write? Why?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,内容具体且连贯,但可以增加更多细节来丰富答案,例如举例说明引发的有趣对话。

Ví dụ: I enjoy writing comments on social media because it allows me to share my thoughts and connect with others. For example, a simple post about a new restaurant once led to a lively discussion about local cuisines.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够具体,缺乏清晰的主题句和支持细节,且最后一句表达不明确,建议明确说明写作内容如何变化并举例。

Ví dụ: Yes, the things I write often change depending on my mood and interests. For instance, I might write about travel one day and then switch to fashion or food the next.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Điểm: 90.0

Gợi ý: 回答自然且内容丰富,结构合理。可以稍微增加一个连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Personally, I prefer typing when I write because it's faster and more efficient, especially when I have a lot to say. Additionally, I can easily edit my work without making a mess.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Sometimes I even surprise with myself what I come up with.

Sometimes I even surprise myself with what I come up with.

这里的反身代词使用错误,正确的表达是 'surprise myself',表示“我自己感到惊讶”。'surprise with myself' 结构不正确。建议使用正确的反身代词形式。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FunMerriment; Ridicule; Enjoyable; Playful; Tease
InterestingAbsorbing
SimpleStraightforward; Clear; Plain; Candid
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