Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Also, avoid repeating the same idea twice. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: No, I don't write much because I find writing challenging and stressful. Instead, I prefer typing or sending voice messages, which I find more convenient for communication.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and could be more structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid repeating words like 'a full a full plan'.

Ví dụ: Although I don't write often, when I do, I like to write about my future goals and plans. For example, I am planning to start a restaurant business with my brother, so I write detailed plans to prepare for it.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but can be improved by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and simplifying complex sentences. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe the things I write can change. For instance, my business goals and plans might change depending on the market situation when I start the business.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains awkward phrasing like 'a random person'. Try to use more natural expressions and provide reasons with linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer typing because it is faster and easier than handwriting. Moreover, most people find typing more convenient for writing quickly.

× No, I don't write a lot as it finds as I find writing a lot more challenging and stressful.

✓ No, I don't write a lot as I find writing a lot more challenging and stressful.

The phrase 'it finds as I find' is incorrect and redundant. The correct form is 'I find' to express personal opinion. Removing 'it finds as' corrects the sentence structure and meaning.

× I use other methods of communication such as typing or maybe voice messages are the most convenient method of communication according to me.

✓ I use other methods of communication such as typing or maybe voice messages, which are the most convenient methods of communication according to me.

The original sentence incorrectly combines two ideas without proper conjunction or relative pronoun. Adding 'which are' clarifies that voice messages are considered the most convenient methods. Also, 'methods' should be plural to agree with 'typing' and 'voice messages'.

× As I don't often write and if I write, I write something about my future goals, future plans and the business which I have to start in coming years.

✓ As I don't often write, but if I do, I write something about my future goals, future plans, and the business which I have to start in the coming years.

The original sentence lacks proper conjunction and punctuation, making it confusing. Adding 'but' and commas improves clarity and sentence flow.

× Basically a restaurant business with my brother and for that a full a full plan is needed.

✓ Basically, a restaurant business with my brother, and for that, a full plan is needed.

The sentence has repetition 'a full a full' and lacks commas for clarity. Removing the repeated phrase and adding commas improves readability.

× As I mentioned earlier, the goals and the plan for my business can be changed according to the circumstances of that situation when I'll really be going this step into the market and things can change.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, the goals and the plan for my business can be changed according to the circumstances of that situation when I really take this step into the market, and things can change.

The phrase 'I'll really be going this step' is awkward and incorrect. Using 'I really take this step' is more natural and grammatically correct in this context.

× I'll definitely prefer typing because writing is a more challenging task to do and typing is a fast thing which a random person can do easily.

✓ I'll definitely prefer typing because writing is a more challenging task, and typing is a fast method that anyone can do easily.

The original sentence uses 'and' without proper punctuation and uses 'thing' which is vague. Replacing 'thing' with 'method' and adding a comma before 'and' improves clarity and correctness.