Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "I don't like to write a lot" and then repeating the idea. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I don't write much, but I do make lists on my phone for daily tasks, which helps me stay organized throughout the day.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has some repetition and could be more structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating phrases like "whenever I whenever I." Also, try to be more specific about why you write these lists.

Ví dụ: I like to write lists of my work-related tasks and shopping items because they help me remember what I need to do and buy each week.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and could be more direct. Try to clearly state your opinion first, then explain with specific reasons. Avoid vague phrases like "I don't know if I would like to write a lot."

Ví dụ: I don't think the things I write will change much because I prefer keeping a clear shopping list, even if I don't write often in the future.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid repeating words like "in in." Also, clarify your preference clearly and support it with reasons using linking words.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is poor, and typing is more convenient and faster.

× I don't like to write a lot but I do write a list on my phone for my day-to-day activities and it helps me to be clear throughout my day.

✓ I don't like writing a lot but I do write a list on my phone for my day-to-day activities and it helps me to be clear throughout my day.

After verbs like 'like', the gerund form (verb + -ing) is generally preferred when expressing general preferences or habits. Using 'like writing' sounds more natural than 'like to write' in this context.

× I like to make a list of my work related activities and also whenever I whenever I visit the market I like to write the product list that I need to buy for the week.

✓ I like to make a list of my work-related activities, and whenever I visit the market, I like to write the product list that I need to buy for the week.

The sentence had a repeated phrase 'whenever I' and lacked proper punctuation, which caused confusion. Removing the repetition and adding commas improves clarity and sentence structure.

× No, I don't think I would change anything that I write because I don't know if I would like to write a lot in the future.

✓ No, I don't think I would change anything that I write because I don't know if I would like writing a lot in the future.

After modal verbs like 'would like', the gerund form (verb + -ing) is preferred to express preferences or desires. 'Would like writing' is more appropriate than 'would like to write' in this context.

× I do prefer typing over handwriting because in in my handwriting is not very good and also typing it is very convenient than handwriting.

✓ I do prefer typing over handwriting because my handwriting is not very good, and also typing is much more convenient than handwriting.

The phrase 'because in in my handwriting' is incorrect; 'in in' is a repetition and unnecessary preposition. Also, 'typing it is very convenient than handwriting' is incorrect; 'much more convenient than' is the correct comparative form. Removing extra words and correcting prepositions improves clarity and grammar.